玲伊 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

這是的工作用的英文自傳,麻煩各位大大幫我看看有沒有要改進的。

My name is Candy. I majored in tourism to graduate from pu-men senior high school . I have also found much interest in learning different languages around the globe, especially English, because it's the "International language".I learned Japanese in senior high school. Regular Japanese I can speak it. I assisted my class teacher to cast students' report. I studied apply English to graduate from Far East University. My English grammar is good. I can speak simple chinwag. Sometimes I read English book to augment my language ability.I have graduated for five years.In five years I had been a private teacher. Now I only want to carry English out in job. To face the work with the optimistic and aggressive attitude is my excellence. To the things not understanding , I dare to ask and seek the answer. Perhaps it meet setback follow difficult , but I can discouraged and time of the meeting strive oneself break through the obstacle, let oneself grow up , hope to have an opportunity to enter your company , give play to and learn to serve company.幫我看一下,有沒有哪裡需要改的,能更好的,謝謝。

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TO Tsai-wei

這句話的意思是~~~或許會碰到挫折跟困難,但我不會氣餒且會期勉自己突破障礙。(ok嗎)

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  • 1 decade ago
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    * = 改過的地方

    My name is Candy. I majored in tourism to graduate from *Pu-men senior high school . I have also found much interest in learning different languages around the globe, especially English, because it's the "International language" used around the world. *Furthermore into my interests in languages, studied Japanese in senior high school, and as the results of that, I can speak common Japanese fluently. *Also additionally, I had assisted my class teacher to cast students' report. *Later on I had studied apply English to graduate from Far East University. My English grammar is *excellent. I can speak simple chinwag. Sometimes I *comprehend English novels to *reinforce my language ability.*For five years I been a private tutor since I graduated. *Now my goal is to achieve a job in English. *Facing my work with optimistic, aggressive, preseperseverance and positive mind is one of my excellent characteristics. *As for problems, uncertainty, confussions and challenges , I dare to observe to seek for the answer. Perhaps it meet setback follow difficulties , but I can discouraged and time of the meeting strive oneself break through the obstacle, let oneself grow up , hope to have an opportunity to enter your company , give play to and learn to serve company.幫我看一下,有沒有哪裡需要改的,能更好的,謝謝。

    這句的意思我有點看不懂...我覺得最好改一下:

    Perhaps it meet setback follow difficulties , but I can discouraged and time of the meeting strive oneself break through the obstacle

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Dear Mr./Ms,

    Thank you very much for your time in viewing this resume.I would love to introduce myself. My name is Candy. I majored in tourism and graduated from Pu-Men College. I am found with learning different languages around the world, especially English, because it's an "International language". I learned some Japanese in college. I can speak speak some basic Japanese. While I was in college, I assisted my class teacher to view students' reports. I studied English until I graduated Far East University. My English grammar is good and I can speak simple chin wag. I like to read English books in order improve my English skills.

    It's been five years since I graduated form college. I had become a private tutor, but I would love to pursue a career that is associated with English..

    I always face problems with optimistic and aggressive attitudes. I always work hard to execute excellence. If there are things I am not familiar with, I am bold enough to ask questions and seek for the answers. Perhaps I will face many difficulties, yet I won't be discouraged. I will remove all the obstacles that are placed in front of me. This job will make me a mature and experienced woman. Thus, I hope I am lucky enough to receive this great opportunity. Please give me a try, and you will not regret it.

    Thank you again for your time and consideration.

    Sincerely,

    Candy

    It's a good reseme, but I don;t think it is professional enough to get you a job. So I changed some of the wordings, hopefully that will help . Good luck to you.

    Source(s): Myself
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  • 1 decade ago

    我覺得把 it 修成原字 或省略 不知有沒有比較好?

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