n a n a asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

中翻英...有哪位英文高手可幫我看看我翻的對不對~急~

我寫了一小段關於健康地球的稿

可以幫我看看我哪裡需要改嗎?

字彙跟文法有沒有錯...

感激不盡~~~

Many years ago.The Earth not yet was polluted.

It has the health islands and sea.

You look!The sea has more blue and the land has more green.

Everybody should protect the beautiful Earth well.

Don't let the earth was polluted!

After all,we live on this Earth ,so we must protect the earth.

大致上的中文是:

很多年以前,地球尚未受到汙染

它有健康的島嶼和海洋

你們看!海有多藍、陸地有多綠

大家應該要好好的保護這美麗的地球

不要讓地球受到汙染!

畢竟我們是住在這地球上所以我們必須保護地球

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  • 1 decade ago
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    我是英文系的啦..以下是我所改的句子..我是改成較合乎文法的句子啦!!你參考看看囉!!希望對你有所幫助囉!!

    Since many years ago, the earth had not been polluted yet.

    It comprises healthy islands and sea.

    Take a look at it!!! You will find out how blue the ocean is and how green the land is.

    Everyone should try to protect this beautiful earth.

    Don't let the earth be polluted.

    After all, we live on this earth so we should protect the earth.

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  • 1 decade ago

    我會這麼寫, 給您參考

    Many years ago , the earth had not polluted yet ,

    It has healthy island and ocean .

    You see! How sea is blue ! How land is green !

    Everybody should protect this beautiful earth .

    Don't let the earth polluted !

    We must protect the earth because we live here .

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