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Good morning, I hope you remember meeting me in seminar this year.
As we are planning the activities of environment programme, we want to invite all Hong Kong students to join for drawing a picture to present what environment they want to enjoy, this is a large scale activates in an academic year.
Update: When we met last time, we believe your company and you are very support to build a good environment to our children, so may I ask you to lend us helping hand?
Update 2: We are preparing the leaflet and want to distribute to schools, included primary, secondary and private school. May I have the qty of student in each school, which data
Update 3: make us easily to distribute the suitable qty of leaflet to each school?
Finally, thanks for your supporting, we are looking forward to hear you soon.
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