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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

可以幫我修正英文文法嗎

我英文文法不好,老師要我交英文自我介紹。麻煩幫我訂正一下!!!

Hello everybody ! My name is Cathy . I stady in XX vocational school . My major is about calculater of information . I am third grade amd I will be graduate soon . My interest is Jazz drum and about music things . I studies jazz drum about five years ago , First I study in church of the worship band , until the senior high school , I start contact the association and cobsist the first band im my life . I plays band about 3~4. It was fun ! And the music can take you a powerful life and confidence life.

大家好,我的名字是Cathy, 我讀XX職業學校,我唸的是有關電腦資訊。我唸三年級且將要畢業。我的興趣是爵士鼓和有關音樂的事。我學爵士鼓大約五年了。起初我是在教會的音樂敬拜讚美團學,直到了高中,開始接觸社團且組成了我人生的第一個樂團。我玩過3~4個樂團,這非常的有趣。音樂可以使你人生充滿力量及帶給你信心。

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  • 1 decade ago
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    。I am third grade amd I will be graduate soon .

    I am third grade, and I'll graduate soon.

    。My interest is Jazz drum and about music things .

    I am interested in Jazz drum and things about music.

    。I studies jazz drum about five years ago

    I have studied jazz drum for five years.

    。First I study in church of the worship band

    At first I learned it in the worship band in the church.

    。until the senior high school , I start contact the association and cobsist the first band im my life .

    Later in senior high school, I started to get in touch with the club and assemble the first band in my life.

    。I plays band about 3~4. It was fun! And the music can take you a powerful life and confidence life.

    I have played about three or four bands. It's really fun ! And music makes you have a energy and confidence life.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I am third grade amd I will be graduate soon .

    1) I am study in year 3...

    My interest is Jazz drum and about music things

    2) My hobby is Jazz...

    I studies jazz drum about five years ago

    3) I was study jazz drum about five year...

  • 1 decade ago

    Hello, my name is Cathy, I read XX vocational school, I read am the

    related computer information. I read three grades also am going to

    graduate. My interest is knight the drum and the related music matter.

    I studied knight the drum about five years. At first I am praise the

    group study in the church music worship, until the high school,

    started to contact the mass organization also to form my life first

    philharmonic orchestra. I have played a 3~4 philharmonic orchestra,

    this unusual interest. The music may cause your life to fill the

    strength and to take to you the confidence.

    抱歉喔~!我不太確定~ ~我是用網路的中翻英

    所以不一定正確喔!

    2007-05-31 19:01:08 補充:

    http://tw.search.yahoo.com/language/

    裡面的喔!

    Source(s): 網路的中翻英, http://tw.search.yahoo.com/language/
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