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Anonymous asked in 社會及文化語言 · 1 decade ago

my grammer

please correct my grammer

at last ,i still stay on my opinion,althought this is not a real school rule but i will try to tell my school presdient to make up this aewsome rule for our school so everyone in our school can get a good grade in our school

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  • HaHa
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    現在續句與你check文法

    at last ,i still stay on my opinion,

    stay on是逼留的意思,第四版牛津雙解辭,就有以下的解釋:a)remain in position on to of sth(留在某物上面),b)remain alight, burning, running, etc保持某種活動狀態(如亮著、燒著、運動著...),c)remain at(a place of study, employemnt, etc)(別人走後,留在(學習、工作等地方)),所以,用stay on不敢說不對,但若你想說繼續堅持自己的意見,可用

    At last, I still hold fast to my opinion,

    although this is not a real school rule but I will try...

    although和but都是連接詞,兩句子句只需要一個連接詞,所以用although就不用but,用but就不用although

    第二,a real school rule,為甚麼用real來修飾school rule,real是真實,實在的意思,莫非你想說,你想推行的規距是假的,不實在的;想,你必不是這意思,你是想說,這不是現有的校規,所你可以說

    although this is not an existing school rule, I will...

    I will try to tell my school president to make up this awesome rule for our school...

    首先,你的學校是否大學、大專,若大學、大專則school president沒有問題,但若是小學的話,通常用school headmaster,或school principal

    awesome是使人害怕之意,awesome使人有負面的感覺,是一條惡法;但看後文,想這條校規是對同學有益處的,所以用:嚴格會好一點:用strict或stringent都可

    to tell my school president to make up...,好像是你命令你的校長,所以你最好用說服,可以寫成

    I will try to convince(persuade) my school principal to add this stringent(strict) school rule.

    so everyone in our school can get a good grade in our school

    首先最後的in our school必須刪除,因為它使句子太累贅;第2,a good grade是指他們只得一科好成績,其他科目未然,想這也不是你的意思,所以要用good grades,  還有so是所以的意思,你的句子是想說:以便,所以要用so that

    so that everyone in our school can get good grades.

    全文如下:

    At last, I still hold fast to my opinion, although this is not an existing school rule, I will try to convince(persuade) my school principal to add this stringent(strict) school rule so that everyone in our school can get good grades.

    2007-05-30 11:26:15 補充:

    是若小學,中學的話...

  • 1 decade ago

    In the end I still agree with my opinion. Although it wasn't a real school rule, but it was a good idea which I could suggest to my school's headmaster/headmistress and let everyone in school can have a chance to get a good grade.

    Source(s): me...留英學生
  • 1 decade ago

    I have used CAPITAL LETTER to show my correction:

    at last ,i still stay on my opinion,althougH this is not a real school rule, i will try to tell my school presdient to make up this aWEsome rule for our school so THAT everyone in our school can get a good grade.

    1. Should be "althougH", NOT "althoughT"

    2. Unlike Chinese, No "BUT" should be followed with "although" in English.

    3. Should be "aWEsome", NOT "aEWsome"

    4. Add "THAT" after the "so" will give a stronger sign for the effectiveness of your advice.

    5. Delete the last "in our school" after "get a good grade" coz it is too wordy...

    Source(s): me
  • 1 decade ago

    Fisrt of all, "Grammar " is the right word.

    At last I still stay on my opinion. Although this is not a real school rule, I will suggest this aewsome rule to our school headmaster/headmistress (depends on man or lady). So every pupil can gain benifit and get higher grades for their test results from it.

    * You can't use "but " in the although sentence!

    Source(s): Myself
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