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水果攤 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

這段英文文章的文法 懇請高手校對

In Neal’s highway interstate 60 journeys, I most like is when Neal in the Fraud art museum experience.

He is mistaken be a well-known painter, and saw a crowd famous artistic commentary who can’t distinguish authentic or fraud of art.

I think, in this experience affect to Neal is about, many people all are follow blind , they cannot pay attentively to understand each matter, they all only are notes the surface, only accepts the information which others people provides, and cannot go carries on the question.

This affect also displays in the movie final, Neal informs his father who office that picture to put upside down, that reflected his father also is a fraud artistic amateur.

以上 文法 以及 標點 符號哪邊有錯呢??? 可嚴格一點

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  • 1 decade ago
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    有點多, 詳細看完對你的英文必有益助, 适號裡面是我改寫的, 給你參考:

    In Neal’s highway interstate 60 journeys, I most like is when Neal in the Fraud art museum experience. (What I like most in Neal’s highway interstate 60 journeys is Neal’s experience of being in the Fraud art museum.)

    1.In…, …你的這個寫法也可以, 我的寫法是把它放到句子裡當子句。

    2.most like 是中文的順序, 而且後面不能放is, 因為一個句子裡面不能有雙動詞(二個動詞), like在這裡是指喜歡(喜歡是動詞,指像的話是形容詞, 前面就要配be動詞), 所以我前面放what關代(關係代名詞), 代表我最喜歡的。

    3.is 後面要放名詞, 不能放when連接詞。

    4.…的經驗, 我的句子是用of(的), 用後面的子句來形容某種經驗。

    He is mistaken be a well-known painter, and saw a crowd famous artistic commentary who can’t distinguish authentic or fraud of art.

    第一句有雙動詞, 後面我不太懂, 可以用中文告訴我你想表達的意思嗎?

    I think, in this experience affect to Neal is about, (I think the effect to Neal during this experience is the blinding of people.) many people all are follow blind, they cannot pay attentively to understand each matter, (Most of people can’t pay attention to observe each matter,) they all only are notes the surface, only accepts the information which others people provides, and cannot go carries on the question.(they only note the surface and accept the information which other people provide, so they can’t go…最後這一句我不太懂你的意思)

    1. affect 是及物動詞, 所以後面不用放to, 直接放受詞就可以了。

    2. many people all are follow blind, are follow為雙動詞, 有一般動詞的句子不用be動詞, 所以are要去掉。 all在這裡是副詞, 副詞在句子裡可擺放的位置為1.be動詞後面. 2. 助動詞後面. 3. 一般動詞前面.(可用be後,助後,一般前來背)。the blinding of people指人們的盲目。

    3. “they all only are notes the surface”, only一樣是副詞, 不能放be動詞前。他們都:all of them。一樣出現雙動詞。句子應為all of them note the surface.

    4. people不是三單(第三人稱單數),後面的動詞不用加s。

    This affect also displays in the movie final, Neal informs his father who office that picture to put upside down, that reflected his father also is a fraud artistic amateur.

    1.第一句副詞also在這裡放一般動詞前面就對了。

    2.最後用副詞finally來修飾動詞, final是形容詞, 後面要放名詞, 所以記住, 副詞修飾動詞(例:We speak English well.), 形容詞修飾名詞(例We speak good English.)。

    3.句子和句子中間放逗號的話要有連接詞, 沒有的話直接句點就好, 所以我個人覺得final後面直接打句點。

    4.中間這句我不太懂, 麻煩中文。

    給你一個建議, 背單字也要記詞性, 句子擺放順序才不會錯。

    介系詞後面一定放名詞, 如果是動詞要加ing改成動名詞才可以。

    我寫的如果有不清楚再問我, 祝你英文突飛猛進!

    2007-06-01 17:17:45 補充:

    快到期了,不要置不理咧...

    每次辛苦回答都被刪除的話,

    以後就沒人願意幫你們看作業翻譯了...

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    在Neal 的高速公路跨境60 次旅途, 我多數像是當Neal 在欺騙美術館經驗。

    他弄錯是一位知名的畫家, 和看了無法區別藝術地道或欺騙的人群著名藝術性的評論。

    我認為, 在這個經驗影響對Neal 是, 許多居於全部是跟隨盲人, 他們無法殷勤地支付瞭解各個問題, 他們全都只是筆記表面, 只有接受其他人居於提供的資訊, 並且無法去繼續問題。

    這個影響並且顯示在電影決賽, Neal 通知辦公室生動描述投入上部, 並且反射他的父親是欺騙藝術性的愛好者的他的父親。

    要是這樣翻是有點奇怪你可以把你要說的意思用國語寫出來用網頁翻出來跟你的看有哪裡不衣樣的地方可做參考

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