彥良 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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In hot days the most I except is eat ice cream by my eyes!

有兩個動詞 except 跟 is

In hot days the most I except that is eat ice cream by my eyes!

感覺怪怪的

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  • 1 decade ago
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    整句念起來怪怪的。

    首先第一個錯誤是except 應該是 expect

    第二個是如你所說的,兩個動詞,怪怪的。

    所以我們要把expect 變成 expected,從動詞 > 形容詞(或修飾詞)

    不過你有沒有沒發現,如果變成expected,那它所修飾的詞會是 "the most I" 嗎? I 是主詞,the most 是比較詞。所以你第三個錯誤是少了object。所以應該改成例如:the most "thing" I expected (我最期待的事情)

    再來就真正遇到兩個動詞碰在一起了is 和 eat。這邊你得把eat改成 to eat。

    雖然在中文我們看的懂用眼睛去享受冰淇淋的味道,但絕對不是用眼睛去吃它,所以英文也一樣,選詞錯誤"eat"。你可以變成 is to taste an ice cream by just watching them。注意到您的ice cream前面沒有冠詞(an / the),很多人容易發生的錯誤。

    最後是In hot days是一個時間(或地方)的詞性,可放到子句最前或後面,不過放在最前最好再加個逗號如 In hot days, the most...

    所以如上面改的話 In hot days, the most enjoyment I expected is to taste an ice cream by just watching them. 綠色是您的時間,紅色是您的主詞或名詞,黑色是動詞,藍色是動作。them為ice cream的代名詞。

    您也可以改成

    the most enjoyment I expected under the hot weather is to taste an ice cream by just watching them. 整句念起比較被動式,不過ok。

    同樣的意思,這句念起來比較主動。

    Under the hot weather, I like to watch the ice cream and feel its taste.

    希望這樣有幫到你

    豚仔

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  • 1 decade ago

    In hot days the most I except is eat ice cream by my eyes

    大大 是要說最期待的是吧

    那應該是

    In hot days the most expectation is .......

    In hot days the most I except that is eat ice cream by my eyes!

    > In hot days the most that I expect is ......

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