小劉 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請高手翻譯成中文and需要修改的地方幫幫忙(急)

幫忙翻譯這兩篇英文..謝謝..比較適合英文自述是哪篇?

(1) My name is xxx. I am a very energetic teenager. This summer,I just

graduated from xxx High School. My class director used

to say that I was the rollest and quitest in our class. Well,

perhaps this is because I am the youngest person in my family. I have

good behavior and I have good personality,too. In

my free time, I enjoy surfing the Internet,reading science and technology

magazines. I hope I can do well in my class in the new University of Technology.

(2) My name is xxx. I am a very energetic boy. This summer,I just

graduated from xxx High School. My class director used

to say that I was call roll and quite composed compared with my classmates. Well,

perhaps this is because I am the youngest son in my family. I am

good behavior and obedient in nature and I usually get along well with my friends. In

my free time, I enjoy surfing the Internet and reading science and technology

magazines. I hope I can do well in my study in the new University of Technology.

PS:xxx不必翻譯..謝謝

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    (1)

    My name is xxx.

    我的名字是xxx

    I am a very energetic teenager.

    我是個非常有活力的年輕人

    This summer,I just graduated from xxx High School.

    今年夏天,我將畢業於某某高中

    (建議:把just改成will)

    My class director used to say that I was the rollest and quitest in our class.

    我的班導常常說我是班上最rollest和最安靜的學生

    (建議:如果是班導的話用teacher或mentor較好,且不用加class

    Rollest這個字我不懂你的意思)

    Well, perhaps this is because I am the youngest person in my family.

    嗯,或許這是因為我是家中年紀最小的一員

    (建議:最好不要這樣用

    提供你一個比較好的寫法—well, perhaps the reason of it is that I am the youngest one in my family. )

    I have good behavior and I have good personality, too.

    我行為良好,人格端正

    (建議:這句有點怪)

    In my free time, I enjoy surfing the Internet, reading science and technology

    magazines.

    在我閒暇時候,我喜歡上網及閱讀有關科學與科技的雜誌

    (建議:應再reading前加一個and)

    I hope I can do well in my class in the new University of Technology.

    我希望我可以在科技大學的新班級上表現好

    (建議:改為I hope I can do well in my new class in the University of Technology.)

    (2)

    My name is xxx. I am a very energetic boy.

    我的名字是xxx。我是個非常有活力的男孩

    This summer,I just graduated from xxx High School.

    (同上)

    My class director used to say that I was call roll and quite composed compared with my classmates.

    (同上)

    (建議:你應該是想說:我比班上同學來得安靜 應該用:I am quieter than my classmates. )

    Well, perhaps this is because I am the youngest son in my family.

    (同上)

    I am good behavior and obedient in nature and I usually get along well with my friends.

    我行為良好,順從自然,而且我經常和朋友相處的很好

    (建議: usually可去掉)

    In my free time, I enjoy surfing the Internet and reading science and technology

    magazines.I hope I can do well in my study in the new University of Technology.

    (同上)

    其實兩段大同小異

    不過要做自述的話

    建議你多寫一點

    描述個性深入一點

    Source(s): 我自己
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