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I think that your restaurant should get bigger area and the restaurant should decorate with plenty of flowers. The clients come into your restaurant; they are not only enjoying the famous dishes, but also plenty of fresh air.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    should get bigger area==> should be more spacious / should be bigger

    :::get bigger area is chinglish

    should decorate with plenty of flowers==> should be decorated with plenty of flowers / should have more flowers as decoration

    :::passive not active

    clients==>customers

    :::clients usually stands for people who seek for the help of a lawyer / private detective, you should use customers instead.

    I think that your restaurant should be more spacious so that customers can take their meals more comfortably. Decorating the restaurant with plenty of flowers will be a good idea since customers will prefer a pleasent scent while they are enjoying their meal.

    Source(s): HKCEE candidate
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  • 1 decade ago

    I think the size of your restaurant should be bigger. It will be a good idea to have plenty of fresh cut flowers. A customer comes to a restaurant not only for the food, but also for the atmosphere. Therefore a spacious and green restaurant will make your clients feel refreshing.

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    1 decade ago

    I think that you should expand your restaurant and renovate the interior with plenty of flowers. The customers choose to come to your restaurant because of the fantastic food and bright and airy surroundings in which to enjoy yourself.

    *** Hope it help *** ^>^

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  • 1 decade ago

    I think that your restaurant should get bigger and the restaurant should decorate with plenty of colourfull flowers, so when the costumers are eating in your restaurant; they are not only enjoying famous dishes, they are also enjoying plenty of fresh air.

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