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sudents problems 請問這段英文,文法上有錯誤嗎? 會考用的,請指點指點 thank you.

Besides, Hong Kong Students have to do a lot of homework and they are even busier than adults. No mater how diligent they are, the only thing they achieve is to realise how to get a better result. They lose their sentiments as they always keep in touch with plenty of cool books day after day.

請問這段英文,文法上有錯誤嗎? 會考用的,請指點指點

如覺得有更美麗的句子,請指點指點. thank you very much.

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  • C.N.K.
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    1 decade ago
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    Besides, Hong Kong Students have to do a lot of homework and they are even busier than adults. No matter how diligent they are, the only thing that they achieve is to realise how to get a better result. They lose their sentiments as they always keep in touch with lots of cool books.

    *^* 【No 『mater』】is a spelling mistake, it should be{No 〔matter〕}

    *^* 【the only thing they achieve is to realise how to get a better result】add 『that』, 【the only thing that they achieve is to realise how to get a better result】to connect the two sentences' structure

    ^+^ 【as】here is meaned 因為, so you use「because / since / due to」, they are the same meaning

    ^_^ 【plenty of】here is meaned 很多, but the main meaning of this is 充足, so it should change to be 『lots of / many ...』

    *^* 【day after day】should be delete, it is unnecessary, because it can be find the same meaning in the last sentence, the word『always』

    Source(s): My Knowledge + My Mind + English Dictionary + My Experience + Have Learned
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  • 1 decade ago

    Students -> students

    mater -> matter

    the only thing they achieve is to realise how to get a better result < 你想講d咩? 點解用achieve呢個字? 我唔係好明 =)

    2007-04-23 17:56:45 補充:

    The Microsoft Word cannot point out all the mistakes. It can't see your usage problems.

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