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asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

簡單的英文自傳問題

我只是想用這個簡單的自傳來表示我大概的英文程度

想請各位前輩能幫我糾正和提供更好的說法

謝謝大家^______^

My name is Wei-yi Sue.Ray is my English name.I graduated from China University of Technology and major in Information Management.

When I have free time,I enjoy surfing the web,reading,play guitar and research the method of Marketing,Internet Marketing especially.

I have great ardor for Marketing.The master of Marketing Philip Kolter is the target of learning for me.I am studying WBSA.I will join in the exam of WBSA by September.

I am a people person,so PM is my favorite job.

Please give me a chance of interview.Thanks.

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  • wawa
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago
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    嗯... 來點比較簡單點的吧....

    其實你的英文算是不錯了喔~^^ 只需要稍微修飾一下~

    My name is Wei-Yi Sue. My English name is Ray. I graduated from Information Management at China University of Technology.

    In my free time, I enjoyed very much in reading, playing guitar, surfing the web and researching for the better marketing method, especially the internet marketing.

    I have great passion (passion 會比較適合) for marketing. The marketing master, Philip Kolter is my study goal that I've learned a lot from him. I am currently studying WBSA and I will be participated (participate 會比較適合) in the WBSA exam in September.

    I am a people person, therefore, I think a PM job will be suitable for me.

    It will be my pleasure to have an interview with you. Please have me as your consideration.

    Thank you.

    Source(s): myself from NY
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  • 1 decade ago

    I graduated from China University of Technology and major in Information Management.

    → ... and major"ed" in Information Management.

    I enjoy surfing the web,reading,play guitar and research the method ...

    → ... reading, play"ing" guitar and doing the method of Marketing, Internet Marketing researching.

    (我不太了解您這邊放especially的意思 :)

    I have great ardor for Marketing.

    → I have great desire for Marketing

    ....is the target of learning for me.

    → Kolter is the model that I want to follow the example of.

    →I am studying WBSA "and going to" join in the exam of WBSA by September.

    I am a people person...

    →您想說的是善與人相處的人嗎? " easy-going person"

    As a whole, I am a out-going person and easy to get alone with. In my opion, PM will be a great position for me. Please do interview me, thank you!

    Source(s): 外文系畢業,待業中 :)
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