急~~~請各位幫我看看這篇作文OK嗎?!或者幫我修改一些!!

Living in country

Life in city is very different from lufe in country.People in large ciyies are much more careful to respect the privacy of the individual.Their

cadence of life is fast.Everybody is busy in work.But in city,There

are more funfair than country.Their medical treatments also complete

with nothing missing.At the same time,people in city are cold and

detacked to each other instead of enthusiastic.And I like to living in my

hometown in country.I like country,although the traffic is less

convenient than city.That is to say,tke environment like air is much

more fresh than city.In addition,we can see flowers are in blooam

everywher,gluttering lake and b;owing with tender breeze.I can enjoy

tke works of God.It makes me relax and happy.That's qhy I luke

country so so much.

請在今天內告訴我~~~感恩~~~

Update:

可能有些單字不小心打錯!!

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    在國家中的生活

    在城市的生活在國家中非常不同於 lufe 。在大的 ciyies 的人們更加小心尊敬個體的隱私。他們的

    生活的韻律是齋戒。每個人都忙於工作。但是在城市中,在那裡

    是更多的 funfair 超過國家。他們的診療也完成

    藉由失蹤的沒事。同時,在城市的人很寒冷和

    對彼此的 detacked 改為狂熱的。而且我喜歡到住在我的

    在國家中的家鄉。我喜歡國家,雖然 tr

    我翻譯的結果~~(我覺得有些許的地方需要改進吧!!)

    Source(s): 看看&因為我不知道你要寫怎樣的作文,所以不知該怎改@_@
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