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妹妹 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

可否請大大幫看一下這樣翻譯有錯嗎?20點

嗨~大家好~今天我要介紹我自己~我們家有五個人~有爸爸~媽媽~姐姐~弟弟和我~我高中時就讀家政科~經過一番努力後考上了大學後~因為本身非常喜歡小孩~所以填選了幼保系~一開始以為幼保系只是單純的照顧小孩如此而已~上了兩年的課之後讓我深深地發覺幼保真的是一門不簡單的科系~我們必須專研幼兒心理學~幼兒文學......等~讓我們可以加深對幼兒的認識及照顧~

當初填寫志願時我心中有一種不確定感~深怕選錯科系影響到我的未來~可是經過兩年的磨練後~我深深覺得當初的決定是對的~我相信在大學學到的這些知識一定可以讓我將來成為一個專業的幼保人員~ 謝謝各位同學的頃聽~~

Hi ~ hello ~ I must after after introduce today I ~ we the family had five people ~ had daddy ~ Aunt ~ the elder sister ~ younger brother and my ~ I when the high school goes study household management branch ~ to pass through diligently to gain admission to the university ~ because itself extremely liked child ~ therefore filled in young elects to guarantee is ~ as soon as starts after to think young guaranteed the department only is on pure attendance child just like this ~ two years class let me deeply deeply detect young nurtured the divine or pristine element within oneself is a not simple branch is ~ we must specially grind the baby psychology ~ baby literature..... ~ will enable us to be allowed to deepen to baby's understanding and looks after ~ initially filled in when the wish in my heart to have one kind not definite to feel ~ to be very afraid chooses the wrong branch was affects after mine future ~ but passes through for two years to discipline ~ I deep deeply to think the initial decision was right ~ I believed learns these knowledge in the university certainly to be allowed to enable me future to become specialized young to guarantee personnel ~ to thank fellow schoolmates just now to listen to ~~

不好意思~~英文不好~~上面的英文是用翻譯軟體翻的,感覺怪怪的~~卻又不知錯在那裡~~可否請大大幫個忙修改一下,或有更好的說法也請教我一下~~拜託了~~

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    嗨~大家好~今天我要介紹我自己~我們家有五個人~有爸爸~媽媽~姐姐~弟弟和我~我高中時就讀家政科~經過一番努力後考上了大學後

    Hi everyone.

    Today, I will like to talk about myself. There are five members in my family, consisting of my parents, my elder sister, a younger brother and myself. During high school I did Home Economics. I continued to work hard and successfully got admitted into the university.

    ~因為本身非常喜歡小孩~所以填選了幼保系~一開始以為幼保系只是單純的照顧小孩如此而已~上了兩年的課之後讓我深深地發覺幼保真的是一門不簡單的科系~我們必須專研幼兒心理學~幼兒文學......等~讓我們可以加深對幼兒的認識及照顧~

    I always have a passion towards children therefore I opted for Early Childhood Care And Education course. Initially, I thought this course is mainly on childcare. But after two years in the course, I realized it encompasses more than that. I have to understand not just child psychology but also on young children literature which further enhance my understanding towards childcare.

    當初填寫志願時我心中有一種不確定感~深怕選錯科系影響到我的未來~

    Earlier when I was filling up the enrolment form, I was rather uncertain of what I wanted to be in the future. I was so afraid of making the wrong choice and my future would thus be affected.

    可是經過兩年的磨練後~我深深覺得當初的決定是對的~我相信在大學學到的這些知識一定可以讓我將來成為一個專業的幼保人員~ 謝謝各位同學的頃聽~~

    But having gone through 2 years of hard work, I firmly believe I have made the right choice. With the acquired knowledge , I hope to become a professional childcare taker after graduated from the university.

    Thank you so much for your time and attention.

    encompasses - 包含

    opt - 選擇

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  • 1 decade ago

    Hi~everyone good~today I passed colleges entrance examination after wanting introduced me by myself~ our house contain five persons~ had father~ mother~ the elder sister~ the younger brother with me~ me attended the home economics section during the days in the senior high school~ the process some kind ofly the efforts behind~liked a kid very much because of oneself~so filled to choose You to protect a department~a starts thinking the You protects a department a pure care kid to just is that's all~had a class to let after me discover You to protect profoundly for two years really is a remarkable department~we have to grind kid's psychology particularly~kid's literature......Wait for~let the understanding and the care that we can deepen to the kid~

    Fill in wishes at the beginning have a kind of indetermination feeling in my heart~fear to choose a wrong department to influence deeply till my future~but whet to practice through two years behind~I deeply feel to decide at the beginning is to~I believe that learn in the university to of these knowledge can certainly will let me become a professional You guarantor member in the future~ thank each classmate to hear just~~

    你好,你好,說 ̄I必須後邊那樣做的 ̄今天后導入I ̄,我們家族,如果 ̄5個人 ̄有爸爸 ̄姑母,姐姐 ̄弟弟和高中去的我的所謂 ̄,I ̄跟隨,為了為了因為用那個自己非常被喜好的孩子 ̄年輕人記上了大學獲得入場不厭其煩地穿過研究家庭經營分枝 ̄的;選出,保證,特別,我們說能級對我深深地深深地使之查出的年輕2歲的這個 ̄確實在自己中神的,或,像隻是哺育初期的要素一樣地純粹的出席孩子上面有部分不是被保證了的年輕人簡單的分枝,為了想是a ̄有必須研磨之後說小寶寶的心理學 ̄小寶寶的文學開始的情形 ̄的;...;為了I說為了想學習為了在在為了覺得選 ̄使成為可能; 有的種類非常怕搞錯了的分枝不明確的我的心的願望最初的決定確實,變成的事中將來使我成為可能容許在大學這些的知識的我,相信的正確的是 ̄深深地 ̄深深地訓練是礦山未來 ̄以後感情,不過,開始穿過的時候後說2年 ̄記上了的s理解和容貌,為了為了聽正好現在的朋友學友說 ̄ ̄感謝保證人員 ̄把年輕人做為專業的;

    我不知你是要中翻英還是英翻中,所以我兩種都翻

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