Girls here is one for you, like it or not??

Question

I feel your body close to mine

I hear your breath and mine in time

I know I'm nothing but it's you that I need

I touch your skin and it starts to feed

My eyes meet yours in secret glance

our bodies locked in ancient stance

you whisper something and I

know it's good

you're acting crazy just like I

knew you would

Embracing my life between your thigh

we will preform in the deadly skies

reducing my mind to endless nights

you send my derams to there demise

realized by your last breath

I take your hair into my hands

I pull it tight to fill your demands

feed my body into yours

know it's right cause that's

my soul you stir!!

Answer 1

Favorite Answer

When people talk about sex it's just the act,but your poem is passionate and mature.You really took the time to capture the essence of making love,this poem is very sensual and exotic.Good job

Source(s): A poetic

Answer 2

absolutely SPEECHLESS..

~beautiful~

ur very good!!

did u write it?

coze I write poetry myself..

My sweet’s embrace grabs hold

of something deep within my soul.

His magic touch soothes my heart

and fills an empty hole.

My sweet’s kisses are so soft and gentle,

more exquisite than fine wine.

His slender fingers course through my hair,

sending shivers down my spine.

Answer 3

very nice (; but the last line needs some work, it didnt flow like the rest of the poem.

Answer 4

It's a sweet poem. Keep them coming!

Answer 5

Yeah, pulling hair...I like it.....only when my husband does it though! Very sensual poem!

Answer 6

I think you really need to get out and get laid. Your writing about it. Especially with a name like that, go do it man. Get some, or alot.

Answer 7

very imaginative!! mayb il *** over n u can give it 2 me in person lol

Answer 8

that was good and kind of disturbing but HOT

Answer 9

I really like that... seriously... thats pretty good...

Answer 10

"Sir thick and hard"--- very juvenile. Even you name is juvenile, grow up buddy!