Girls here is one for you, like it or not??

I feel your body close to mine

I hear your breath and mine in time

I know I'm nothing but it's you that I need

I touch your skin and it starts to feed

My eyes meet yours in secret glance

our bodies locked in ancient stance

you whisper something and I

know it's good

you're acting crazy just like I

knew you would

Embracing my life between your thigh

we will preform in the deadly skies

reducing my mind to endless nights

you send my derams to there demise

realized by your last breath

I take your hair into my hands

I pull it tight to fill your demands

feed my body into yours

know it's right cause that's

my soul you stir!!

13 Answers

  • 1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    When people talk about sex it's just the act,but your poem is passionate and mature.You really took the time to capture the essence of making love,this poem is very sensual and exotic.Good job

    Source(s): A poetic
  • 1 decade ago

    absolutely SPEECHLESS..


    ur very good!!

    did u write it?

    coze I write poetry myself..

    My sweet’s embrace grabs hold

    of something deep within my soul.

    His magic touch soothes my heart

    and fills an empty hole.

    My sweet’s kisses are so soft and gentle,

    more exquisite than fine wine.

    His slender fingers course through my hair,

    sending shivers down my spine.

  • 1 decade ago

    very nice (; but the last line needs some work, it didnt flow like the rest of the poem.

  • 1 decade ago

    It's a sweet poem. Keep them coming!

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Yeah, pulling hair...I like it.....only when my husband does it though! Very sensual poem!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I think you really need to get out and get laid. Your writing about it. Especially with a name like that, go do it man. Get some, or alot.

  • 1 decade ago

    very imaginative!! mayb il *** over n u can give it 2 me in person lol

  • 1 decade ago

    that was good and kind of disturbing but HOT

  • 1 decade ago

    I really like that... seriously... thats pretty good...

  • 1 decade ago

    "Sir thick and hard"--- very juvenile. Even you name is juvenile, grow up buddy!

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