我想application merchandising clerk唔識點樣改( )個一段~~請幫幫手~~我之前做過mc既
I am replaying to your adverting on.............
I graduated from my secondary school in 2001 and business studies in 2002. My present job is as a merchandising clerk. (The position brings me into close contact with our customers, where it is important to be patient, polite and responsive. Although I enjoy the challenge of my job, I would like to gain more experience.)
Enclosed please ....at earliest convenience.
- ?Lv 61 decade agoBest Answer
Application for the position of Merchandising Clerk
With reference to your advertisement in the XXX Post on 25 Jan., I am extremely interested in applying for the position of Merchandising Clerk .
I graduated from the XXXX Secondary School in 2001 and obtained a Certificate/Diploma in Business Studies in 2002 . My present job / position as a Merchandising Clerk provides lots of opportunities for me to be patient, polite and responsive in dealing with my duties and getting on well with customers and my colleagues . Although I have found my present job challenging, I would like to obtain much more experience from your company/ I would like to have a position with greater exposure and excent career prospects .
Please find enclosed a copy of my resume for your consideration . I would be grateful if you could grant me an interview at any time convenient to you. I am confident that with my motivation , qualifications and expenience I can assure a positive contribution to your company .
- SeamusLv 71 decade ago
I am writing to reply to your advertisement of merchandising clerk recruitment on (date).
I graduated from my secondary school in 2001 and finished my business studies in 2002. My present job is working as a merchandising clerk. The position gives me opportunity to getting into close contact with our customers, and it trains me to be patient, polite and responsive. Although I enjoy the challenge from my job, I would like to gain more experience in your kind company.
ps. the late sentence seems that you like your job, it will make the other wonder if you want to change your job.