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請幫忙改這篇英文作文 War and Peace There is no denying that everyone tends to hope the world would be peaceful forever. On the contray, there are still many wars breaking out in some countries. Why? Why people have to fight with each other? I am always afflicted with this question, not knowing who can tell me the... show more 請幫忙改這篇英文作文
War and Peace

There is no denying that everyone tends to hope the world would be
peaceful forever. On the contray, there are still many wars breaking out in some countries. Why? Why people have to fight with each other?
I am always afflicted with this question, not knowing who can tell me the reason.
Peace is the most wonderful thing in the world. If we can live together with peace, there would be no fight on the earth. The more peace we
hold, the less war we have.
All in all, if we want the world go on with peace, we should forgive and spread your love to others.
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