bonnie asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

急~~請幫我校訂簡短的英文自傳 (20點) 謝謝 !!

不好意思,我有三年設備工程的經歷,但是英文不好,

請幫我校定一下,我簡短的英文自傳。謝謝 !!

My name is ___,I am twenty nine years old. There are five people in my

family. Including my parents, two old sister and me. I graduated from

___ institute of technology, majored in automation engineering. My last

job is ___ incorporated. I have three years in this company. I am an

engineer of equipment. My work is to maintain the equipment and

sometime I will connect some cases. On the personal side, I think I am

very frank and have a strong sense of responsibility. Is I above personal

simple introduction.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    There are five people in my family.

    把people 改成members 嚕

    因為people不可數,本身即是複數

    ==>There are five members in my family.

    Including my parents, two old sister and me.

    冒昧問你一下喔,沒有別的意思,你是用中文字字翻英文的吧?

    這樣沒有主詞不行唷^^

    因為有兩個姊姊,所以要 s 複數唷

    ==>They are my parents, two old sisters and me.

    由於不知你畢業於什麼學校,所以給你一些寫畢業的用法唷

    如果是畢業於專科性的研究所用institute

    假如是畢業於單一系所像是醫藥學院、英文學院之類的,就是專攻某一科的大學學院,那就用college

    那如果是多系所的大學學院就用university嚕

    舉例:I graduated from National Taipei University of Technology.

    而你的

    I graduated from___ institute of technology, majored in automation engineering.

    逗點後改成

    ==>, and I majored in automation engineering.

    My work is to maintain the equipment and sometime I will connect some cases.

    ==>My work is maintaining the equipment. And sometimes I connect cases.

    有時候是sometimes哦 , 你打太快了少一個letter哦^^

    On the personal side, I think I am very frank and have a strong sense of responsibility. Is I above personal simple introduction.

    你是要寫在你個人的觀點之類的嗎?

    可以直接述說就好了,自傳要簡短也要有重點唷

    盡量不要用你個人的內心話嚕^^

    ==>I am a straightforward man. I have a strong sense of responsibility.

    Above-mentioned introduction is my simple autobiography.

    That's all. Thank you for reading.

    以上的答案希望你有滿意嚕^^

    也祝你工作順利啦

    2007-01-19 15:29:17 補充:

    My name is ___, I am twenty nine years old. There are five members in my family. They are my parents, two old sisters and me. I graduated from___ institute of technology, and I majored in automation engineering. My last job is ___ incorporated. I have three years experiences in that company.因字數限制補下面

    2007-01-19 15:33:05 補充:

    I am an engineer of equipment. My work is maintaining the equipment. And sometimes I connect cases. I am a straightforward man. I have a strong sense of responsibility. Above-mentioned introduction is my simple autobiography. That's all. Thank you for reading.

    原想用補充內容打完整的給你,結果字數太多,所以分兩個補充嚕^^

    2007-01-19 15:34:08 補充:

    如果還有下次的話,盡可能把中文也一起貼在問題裡吧。

    這樣才比較有原文的內容意思哦^^

    不然的話,你的原意可能就會不太一樣了

    Source(s): 英文系學生, 英文系學生
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  • 1 decade ago

    My name is XXX. I am twenty nine years old. There are five people in

    my family, including my parents, two elder sisters and I. I was

    graduated from XX university. I was majored in automatic engineering.

    My recent job was at XX company. I have three years of working

    experience in this company. I am an enginneer of equipment. My job is

    to maintain the equipment and connect some cases once a while.

    I am a frankly and responsible person.

    最後一句完全看不懂@@

    如果有中文更好了

    2007-01-21 07:40:03 補充:

    因為不知道用途.所以只改了你的文法和修辭部分..內容不是很正式.而且不知道是oral 還是written自傳.用法有些許不同..看你囉.加油吧

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  • 1 decade ago

    My name is ___, I am twenty-nine years old. There are five people in

    my family. My parents, two elder sisters and me. I graduated from ___

    institute of technology. I majored in automation engineering. My last

    job is ___ incorporated. I have worked for three years long in this

    company. I am an engineer of equipment. My work is to maintain the

    equipment and sometimes I will connect some cases. For myself, I think

    I am very frank and have a strong sense of responsibility. All of above is

    my personal simple introduction.

    給你參考看看

    其實你自己寫的問題都不大...照著你寫的..循著你要表達的意思我也只幫你改了一點...可以的話..下次中英文一起PO上來...這樣會比較清楚你要表達的意思...要校訂也比較容易@@~

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