妮兒 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

麻煩幫我改一下我的英文作文~~~~感激不盡

There was an inscrutable thing happened to me when I was an elementary student.

On one day, I want to school by bus as usual. When I was ready to get off, the driver didn’t open the car door because a stranger who carried three sharp knifes got on.

The stranger menaced the driver with a sharp knife to driver to see the mayor. HE KIDNAPPED THE WHOLE BUS!! A lot of people was scared and seated together.

After a while, a crowd of report use SNG to report immediately (LIVE), the bus was beast by the police who wanted to save us.

The kidnapper had been deadlocked for three hours with the police, finally legislator 郝龍斌(his name) showed up and conciliated him then we all safe!! The kidnapper just want to see higher-up , because he was a deliration. That’s a truth in my life, I feel special and scared!!

thank you

非常感謝

希望可以在星期一以前改出來

謝謝^^

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  • 1 decade ago
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    There was an inscrutable thing that happened to me when I was an elementary student.

    One day, I went to school by bus as usual. When I was ready to get off, the driver didn't open the bus door to let me out because a stranger who carried three sharp knifes got on.

    The stranger terrorised the driver with a sharp knife in an attempt to get the driver to take him to see the mayor. HE KIDNAPPED THE WHOLE BUS!! All the passangers were scared and huddled together.

    A short while later, one passanger used SNG to report what was happening (LIVE) with the bus so the police could try to save us.

    The kidnapper ended up being in a stand-off with the police for three hours. Finally the negotiator 郝龍斌(his name) showed up and spoke with the kidnapper and conciliated with him. We were all safe!! The kidnapper just want to see someone higher-up , because he was a delirious. This is a true story. An event that still makes me feel scared and in a strange way, special!!

    Source(s): 老公(他是澳洲人)
  • 1 decade ago

    There was an inscrutable thing happened to me when I was in elementary school .

    One day, I wanted to go to school by bus as usual. When I was ready to get off, the driver opened the door of the car because a stranger who carried three sharp knifes getting on.

    The stranger menaced the driver with a sharp knife to see the mayor. HE KIDNAPPED THE WHOLE BUS!! A lot of people was scared and sit with each other.After a while, a crowd of jurnalist used SNG to report immediately, and it's a live news, the bus was beasted by the police who wanted to save us.The kidnapper had been deadlocked for three hours with the police, finally legislator 郝龍斌 showed up and conciliated him then we all safe!! The kidnapper just want to see more far , because he was a deliration. That's a truth in my life, I feel special and scared!!

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