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religions sell salvation

making propmises hard to keep

confusing the mind withcontradicting belief

the modern way of thinking

seeking refuge in a material world

where everchanging values r givin relief

here we r on the edge of time

minds in confusing are fading out from reality

fatal illusions of life dancing on a volcano

the future generation

will inhrit the idols of our time

at the mercy of perverts

adoring corruption and crime

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    it sucks my balls

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  • 1 decade ago

    I think it's an awesome poem. It does tell what most religions are like in this day in age

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  • mandm
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    Your poem pretty well speaks the truth of what is happening. You should write it to music and let others enjoy it.

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  • 1 decade ago

    aiight but even out the rhyme scheme it makes it seem sloppy, just having that last rhyme in the end

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  • 1 decade ago

    .Is good and some what correct, and I has a stile similar to that of the lyrics of "Slayer"

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  • ?
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    tanz auf dem vulkan ...dancing on a volcano .... that'd be a good song title.

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  • 1 decade ago

    Its kinda boring.

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  • 1 decade ago

    It's okay

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    It's okay

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