What do you think of this piece of writing?

It’s all a story of big confusion, blanks and darkness. I know so little about him, so many images of him form in my mind because I only dare to speculate based on every word, every gesture, every attitude which I interpret in so many ways and to which I react emotionally in so many ways. A personality that contradicts itself so many times, or maybe it’s only the way I see him...

Do I like him? Sometimes I think yes, sometimes I think no and I believe the best way would be to forget him and never talk to him again, but when I make this decision he does something which makes me go back to him...

Sometimes he sounds so young, sometimes he sounds so old it’s confusing and I believe inappropriate. It makes me think I shouldn’t have talked to him in the first place, I should have ignored him and left, this is something which has been on my mind ever since I first stopped to talk to him knowing I shouldn’t. Something inside tells me it’s wrong, that I shouldn’t talk to him... I live in confusion because I am afraid of the truth, of any clear-cut answers about him. Sometimes I prefer not to know... because I believe if I did, I’d run away from him never to come back – and there’s something about him that keeps pulling me back towards him even if I know I shouldn’t let myself be pulled like that...

When he sounds old, I feel like running away from him, crying, feeling guilty, not at my ease... but after a pause, and if he does sound young again, I forget about these....

I thought it won’t last long, but it did. And it still does. I didn’t think he’d like me, or at least not for long...

Sometimes I don’t even know if he likes me... sometimes it seems clear he does... and in a way that scares me because I don’t know how to continue or how to behave...

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  • Friend
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago
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    It sounds like how I feel sometimes and it sounds like me sometimes, and why are we afraid of those two things?

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  • 1 decade ago

    This seems to be an entry in a diary of a young lady with a proposed title of "Heart at a Crossroad". Anyway, if it is a part of a biography that reflects how a certain person is feeling at a moment of her life...well, then, it is that.

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  • 1 decade ago

    It's too boring.I stopped reading it at fourth line.Put some life into it.You want your readers to read your books not use them as sleeping balms.- 'what a super confused and boring character.'

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  • JAMI E
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    Seems to me like some very well written poetry. Just rearrange the stanzas.

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  • 1 decade ago

    I don't know. I stopped reading at,

    "It’s all a story of big confusion..."

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  • 1 decade ago

    I found this piece to be as confusing as the narrator themselves.

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  • 1 decade ago

    You should start writing stories...u seem to have it going on! Kudos!

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  • 1 decade ago

    Not bad, not bad at all. It would be interesting to see who this person is.

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  • kcdude
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago

    Too boring to read it all...but that's a great sign of great literature!

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  • 1 decade ago

    I love it, I would like to read more.

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