Anonymous
Anonymous asked in Business & FinanceCareers & Employment · 1 decade ago

HW ,check my grammar thx 1/2?

This homework is about recruiting a employee. Check my grammar and structure.

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Owing to increased business, we have an immediate requirement for ONE senior accountant to lighten the overloaded tasks of the Accounting Department.

The new employee will take charge of some paper works. As for another accountant, she will be responsible for client service, general administration, and staff performance appraisal.

The job summary of the employee is as follows:

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Due to increased business, we have an immediate need for ONE senior accountant to lighten the load of the Accounting Department.

    The new employee will take charge of some clerical tasks including X, Y, and Z. (What do you mean by "As for another accountant?") "Paper works" sounds to me more like a secretary rather than an accountant. What accountant things will the person be doing?

    I hope this is helpful. You need to work a little on work choice. For example, you lighten a burden not "the overloaded tasks." I have never seen the term "paper works" before. Maybe you should look in the accounting section of Monster.com in order to get some ideas for how the job add would look. Don't copy but look at the phrasing and word choices those employers make in their job ads.

    Is the sole job of this person to complete clerical tasks? Is that what you mean by paper works?

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Owing to increased business, we have an immediate requirement for one senior accountant to lighten the overloaded tasks of the Accounting Department.

    The new employee will take charge of some paper work. As for another accountant, she will be responsible for client service, general administration, and staff performance appraisal.

    The job summary of the employee is as follows:

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  • orson
    Lv 4
    3 years ago

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