i wrote this poem to check it out?

Question

When I saw you I knew you where my true love

I swore you where an angel from above

I would walk a million miles

Just to see your precious smile

Please don’t cry my angel I know the road is long

But if we try together I know we can t go wrong

I all carry you my angel if that is what it takes

Across molten lava broken glass even if it s snakes

Please don’t cry my angel I know the road is long

But if we try together I know we can’t go wrong

I’ll carry you my angel if that is what it takes

Across molten lava broken glass even if its snakes

You make me feel happiness words cannot describe

Please understand this love I have inside

But you'll always have a place right here in my heart

And I will always love you I have right from the start

Answer 1

Favorite Answer

Beautiful! Have you sent it to the one you love?

Answer 2

good one man...wish i had copied this 10 years back ;)

Answer 3

good decriptive words...you catch the image....

Answer 4

aww.. so sweet.. nice.. beautifully written.. =D

Answer 5

Whoa! :)