what do u think of this poem?

i found it on the internet, i dont remember where though, google can get u deep in the web,

it goes like this

The structure of our nation;

the walls of hate,

laid upon a foundation of the corpses of our fellow,

covered with a roof of dissolution,

in the name of liberty,

containing the fountains of indiscipline,

and the springs of delinquency,

do drink and be merry

The spirit of childhood is lost,

lost in this maze of animosity,

and the feast of ignorance,

passed down the strings of lineage,

with surplus growing on the farms of folly,

is enjoyed in bounty,

what is this aberration,

the united states, our nation

6 Answers

  • 1 decade ago
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    this poem is very deep. it tells alot about our country and the style of whoever made it. i really like it

  • Ranto
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    What do I think? I think it reads more like prose than poetry.

    There is no meter, no rhyme (not that there has to be rhyme) and very little imagery. It is a bit obvious, don't you think?

    Nope -- don't think much of it.

  • 1 decade ago

    A very good one to lead the way.

  • No one
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    Very negative, demeaning of our country, and, in short, a terrible poem.


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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I think its just another hate usa poem

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    if u type it on on poems .com it will take u to it

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