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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

【誠心發問】請幫我修改文法錯誤的地方,謝謝

     The best way to learn more English is to read, listen, and practice. First, you should practice more English. Speak in English to your friends, teachers, or a stranger. You have to do more school work. The works that teachers gave you, you have to finish it. Next, you can read English novel or magazine. In the school day, you can go to school library. In the holiday, you can go to public library. If you didn’t finish the books, you can borrow the books from the library. Finally, listen to a teacher in class. It helps your listening. You can listen to the radio or TV. English helps you a lot in many different ways.請幫我把以上文句修改流暢一點,如果有文法錯的地方也請幫忙修改一下喔!!感謝大家,我真的很需要 ˊˋ

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發問天數寫錯了

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  • 1 decade ago
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    The best way to learn more English is to read, listen, and practice. ==>加上more雖然沒錯,但顯得累贅,還不如改成to learn English better(把英文學的更好)

    First, you should practice more English. ==>如果改成practice English more often(更常練習英文)比較好喔!

    Speak in English to your friends, teachers, or a stranger. ==>可以說 Speak English to your friends, teachers, or (even) a stranger.加上even有強調的作用,或是Speak to your friends, teachers, or a stranger in English.

    You have to do more school work. ==>把school work改成homework比較好,因為英文說家庭作業就是用homework

    The works that teachers gave you, you have to finish it. ==>請把gave改成give,否則會被理解成”老師以前給你的作業(表示現在或以後不會給了)”

    Next, you can read English novel or magazine.==>最好改成novels and magazines,不然就變成只讀一本小說跟雜誌了,而且才能呼應到下兩句的books

    In the school day, you can go to school library. In the holiday, you can go to public library. If you didn’t finish the books, you can borrow the books from the library. Finally, listen to a teacher in class. It helps your listening.==> 如果用listening ability(聽的能力)意思會更完整

    You can listen to the radio or TV. English helps you a lot in many different ways.

  • 1 decade ago

    The best way to learn more English is to read, listen, and practice. First of all, you should practice English more by talking English with your friends, teachers, or even strangers. You should do more school work and complete the assignments that the teacher gives you. Next, you can read English novels or magazines. During school days, you can visit the school library. Or you may visit a public library in holidays. If you couldn't finish the books in the library, you may borrow them from the library. Finally, listen closely to your English teacher in class. It really helps your listening skills. You can also listen to the radio or TV. English helps you a lot in many different ways if you learn it well.

  • BABOO
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    1 decade ago

    我直接修改,你再自己對照一下

    The best way to learn English more is to practice, inclusive of practicing listening, speaking, reading, and writing. First, you should take advantage of every opportunity to practice English. Speak in English to your friends, teachers, or even strangers. You have to take good care of all the school work about English. As to the assignment that your English teacher gives you, you have to finish it well. Next, you can read English novels or magazines. During the school days, you can go to the school library to consult some English materials. On holidays, you can go to the public library, too. There you can find the latest materials for English learning. Finally, listen carefully to your English teacher in class. It can improve your listening ability. You can listen on the radio or TV as well. In this way, I think you can imporve your English ability in a very short time.

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