語臻 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文自傳~~請幫我看看~~有啥要修正的~謝謝

Autobiography

My Name is May Ling Wang, 25 years old. There’s five people in my family, my dad is a seaman, working hard about outside, my mum is a housewife, care for the whole family, I have two sisters and one brothers and me. My character is bright and cheery, I having a passion for thing of having the challenge, I hoping to develop an own potential continuously.

After junior high school graduated, I select nurse academy to attend, in Peacetime, I try hard on the lessons, I participate in the difference association activity. Substantial own 5-year academy that is student lives. I recognize a lot or peoples. I as well have many good friends. I learn how about people live together and speak philosophy. and; developed my self-confident and responsibility.

After nurse academy graduated, I acquire the nurse certificate, also continuously accumulation experience in the nursing work, and enhance own the work ability and nursing independence. To me, the nursing is abstruse academics; needing a continuous research and studying, so, in own profession road .I make a career planning. The nurse road is endless. I will be abide by four principles "Macroscopic, Temperament, Field, concern". I hope give the most pluperfect care for patient.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    我直接幫你重寫好ㄌ

    Autobiography

    My name is May Lin Wang. I am 25 years old. There are sixpeople in my family including me. My dad is a seaman, working hard about outside. My mom is a typical housewife, takes care of the whole family. I have two sisters and one brother. My character is bright and cheery. I have a passion of hoping to develop my own potential continuously. After I graduated Junior High, I selected the nurse academy to attend, in Peacetime, I try hard on the lessons, I participate in the difference association activity. Substantial own 5-year academy that students live in. I recognized a lot or people. I have many good friends. I learned about how people live together and speak about philosophy. and by talking to them, I developed my self-confident and responsibility.

    After I graduated the Nurse Academy, I acquired the nurse certificate, also continuously on accumulating experience in the nursing work, and enhance my own work ability and nursing independence. To me, the nursing is abstruse academics; needing a continuous research and studying, so, in own profession road, I make a career planning. The nurse road is endless. I will be abide by four principles "Macroscopic, Temperament, Field, concern". I hope give the most pluperfect care for patient.

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  • 1 decade ago

    上面的自傳是我用翻譯軟體和哈電組查的~~所以有些地方還是有問題~~ex:mun dude 純粹是口語話譯音問題~~~我還是會在修正的~~謝謝各位達人幫忙~~~感謝~~

  • 1 decade ago

    may I ask a quick question???

    what do you mean by "omg" and "dude" ??

    I know what it means when you say "hey, dude~"

    What does it mean in that case??? "bad grammar and 'dude'"

    2006-10-20 22:59:43 補充:

    I did use my brain and I didn't ask what is bad grammar thank you very much. You queer.

    2006-10-24 09:45:01 補充:

    Yeah yeah, when competing "gayness" "dumbness" and "brainlessness" with you, I'm the loser.

    Also, just to let you know that I, the queer-wannabe, don't use my brain when talking with a pussy doosh bag that only use "her ass" to think.

    2006-10-24 09:45:12 補充:

    ps.

    逃幾蓋聽到痞賽嗆瞎勾嗆架大聲ㄟ!

    小鼻屎,會勞英文很厲害嗎??

    死! !!!

    I hope you understand, so we could have more discussion.

  • 1 decade ago

    My Name is May Ling Wang, 25 years old.There're five people in my family. My parents, two sisters and a brother.My father is a hard worker, he is a seaman so he has to leave home for period of time because of his job. My monther is a traditional housewife, she looks after the family.

    My characters are bright and cheery. I am keen to challenge new things because they can help me to develop my potential continuously.

    After I graduated from junior high school, I chose nursing academy for the further studying. I studied hard on the lessons and participated different association activities so I gained a lot of benifits during this 5 years. For example, I met a lot of people and made many good friends. I learnt how to bulid up a good relationship and communicate with people. Furthermore, I also developed my self-confidence and responsibility.

    when I completed the nursing academy course, I acquired the nursing certificate. ....

    抱歉 剩下的沒時間幫你修正,我忙著作報告,有空在幫你修剩下的

    P.S 修的不好別怪我喔 我盡力了

    還有你家到底幾個人5,6?你寫5個,我算一下怎麼少一個,你改一下ㄅ

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