我的英文自傳 哪裡有文法錯誤或語意不通順

My name is Jenny. I am 18 years old and female. I was born and raised in Kaohsiung, a beautiful city. My blood type is B and my constellation is Leo. There are six people in my family including me, and I am the oldest one in my family. This summer, I freshed from NAN-TZE senior high school. Now I am a freshman. I... show more My name is Jenny. I am 18 years old and female. I was born and raised in Kaohsiung, a beautiful city. My blood type is B and my constellation is Leo. There are six people in my family including me, and I am the oldest one in my family. This summer, I freshed from NAN-TZE senior high school. Now I am a freshman. I am an optimistic and aggressive person.
It is fortunate for me on the road of learning. In the past, my grade is not very excellent, but my achievements always keep average level. All the subjects, my course is English. I have learned English 7 years. Learning foreign language is always my interest and my goal. Because I think it is interesting to say one thing via different sounds. And also to absorb knowledge both in and outside of classroom and share it with people who have the same interest as me. I also like athletics. I always play basketball when I have free time or I feel depressed.
Although I am an optimistic person, I still have low tide. Whenever I feel depressed or unhappy, I will play basketball. It will make me forget those discouraging matters temporarily. What’s more playing basketball is also good way for physical fitness. I also prepare a bottle. I get a bottle and speak out my feelings into the bottle, and then cover the lid of the bottle. Later on I will shake the bottle with all my efforts. Afterwards. I could pour my bad feelings into the toilet and push the flush handle. By doing so, all depressing matters seem to be far away from me.
In the future, I want to improve my English ability. The most I want to do is pass the graduate school examination. I expect myself that I can work hardly in my university life. In conclusion, I also hope one day I could accomplish my dream which is to become a well-trained courier.
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