- wellLv 71 decade agoFavorite Answer
My name is Tom. I am a very energetic boy. This summer, I just graduated from Yangming Senior High School. My class director used to say that I was quite composed compared with my classmates. Well, perhaps this is because I am the eldest son in my family. I am independent in nature and I usually get along well with my friends. In my free time, I enjoy surfing the Internet and reading extracurricular books. I hope I can do well in my study in the new college. 大體上，這麼短的自傳，實在表達不了太多的訊息，所以建議您長話短說，表達重點精華即可。 因此，在上面的自傳短篇中，簡單地介紹了您的「姓名」、「畢業學校」、「教師評語」、「家中排行」、「基本個性」、「交友情形」、「平日嗜好」、「未來展望」。 以上謹供您參考，您可以根據您的實際情形，再增減文字，發揮您的創意.....自傳僅是對求職者自身的簡介...履歷表卻是包含全部詳細的說明,當然自傳也是其中一部份至於開頭該怎麼寫, 我建議可以寫你本身的條件中最能夠吸引面試者注意的部分.譬如說, 假設你覺得你很負責任的特點對工作很有幫助, 可以寫, Being responsible to any thing I do, I think it will do an great help on maintaining our customer. 或者你覺得你所學的跟這工作很有相關, 你也可以一開始就寫說你主修甚麼, 因為對甚麼甚麼很有研究, 希望能夠在這份工作中發揮所長之類的. 在第一段之後, 才開始寫譬如你的家庭, 學校對你造成的影響, 之後才是一些你有甚麼其他興趣之類的.總之, 在大部分英文的文章中, 都很習慣在第一段點出最重要的事情, 再來才是次要, 然後接在後面的是只需大概提一下的事情. 重要性的程度有點像一個倒三角型, 跟中文作文起承轉合把最重要的放在後面講有些區別.這樣寫除了比較符合英文寫作的特點, 另外也是讓你比較可以在一堆用"My name is XXX" "I was graduated from XXX" 這一類開頭的自傳中跳出來. 應該比較會讓人想繼續看下去. 你可以看看這本書[有效撰寫求職英文自傳]他是應用英文寫作系列之三Writing Effective Employment Application Statements有效撰寫求職英文自傳作者 : 柯泰德(Ted Knoy)書中內容包括書中內容包括: 1. 表達工作相關興趣 2. 興趣相關產業描寫3. 描述所參預方案裡專業興趣的表現4. 描述學歷背景及已獲成就 5. 介紹研究及工作經驗6. 描述與求職相關的課外活動7.綜合上述寫成精確求職英文自傳。http://www.cc.nctu.edu.tw/~tedknoy/html/lla.html%E... : 柯泰德(Ted Knoy)書中內容包括書中內容包括: 1. 表達工作相關興趣 2. 興趣相關產業描寫3. 描述所參預方案裡專業興趣的表現4. 描述學歷背景及已獲成就 5. 介紹研究及工作經驗6. 描述與求職相關的課外活動7.綜合上述寫成精確求職英文自傳。http://www.cc.nctu.edu.tw/~tedknoy/html/lla.html%E...Source(s): 網站
- Anonymous1 decade ago
Chapter 1- My Life Begins - Introduction
Welcome to my family.
My life began on the 8th of August 1992 at Hsinchu Hospital in Taiwan. My mum and dad named me ‘Kuan – Ting’ it means best in the world, they named me Kevin afterwards. There are five members in my family. I am the youngest. My mum, dad and two sisters. My mum Claire, she’s 49 this year, my dad Steven, turning 51 this year, my sister Christina, turning 22 this year and my other sister Joanne, she’s 21 this year, and they were all born in Taiwan too. My mum is an Accountant and my dad is a Marketing Director. They both worked and owned their own company before we immigrated to Australia. Since they have been here, they have not been active in work. They have both retired, how lucky! Actually my dad still has a small business which keeps him busy sometimes, but my mum is fully retired.
Since I am the only boy in the family one may think I am spoilt rotten. However I am not, my parents are very strict. They stress the importance of education. They have high expectations of me in everything especially my school work. As a result they place a lot of pressure on me. I am expected to perform my best and get good results. I feel that they are over – protective I envy my Australian friends who seem to have so much fun going out and doing things outside school hours. Being the only son has some benefits but there are also drawbacks. Sometimes I wish I have a bit more freedom. I do not seem to have time for myself because I am expected to be practising or doing some work all the time. Watching television is very rare and even playing Playstation 2 is forbidden during school days.
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'well'大大的方式是必較不正式的寫法也不是不好只是有點像小學生寫的而已.如果你覺得那好的話我也沒話說指示他寫的too simple比較像在班上隨便瞎掰(not criticising)的介紹自己. For example: i enjoy playing basketball with my friends on the weekend or i like playing onlines games because you use strategies and tactics 有很多就是了Source(s): ME!!!