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Chester asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

英文達人麻煩幫忙校正一篇短文~! 很口語也很短 !

我習慣騎著機車到處跑~ 從我高中的時候就如此,這是我唯一的交通工具

I ride motorcycle to everywhere.

since I was a senior high school student.

This is my only transport.

我騎了6年的機車 所以很多路面上的狀況我都很清楚

I've been riding motorcycle for six years,therefore,

I can handhold the situation of the road.

也因為騎習慣了 我總是騎的很快 ~ 覺得時間就是金錢

騎車在路上我很沒有耐心 尤其是當我很趕著去一個地方

而前面又有人騎車擋我的路 我就會很生氣

and I used to speeding , cause time is money

in the other hand , I'm very impatience~

especially when i rush to the class or place~

and someone in my way i ride. i will be really pissed off.

沒想到 事情發生了!!

finally , things happend

在去年的十月 我發生了嚴重的車禍

last year, a serious traffic accident happend to me.

因為騎快車 緊急剎車滑倒

just becasue i'm speeding and i braked my motorcycle emergent so i

slipped and fell!

我就像是個棒球選手 要從一壘盜二壘一樣的撲壘

I just like a baseball player who want to steal a base and lunged.

我的手臂的皮膚被削掉了一大片 也因此留下了疤 !!

My skin of arms was scraped a sheet. The injury scarred my arms.

我很慶幸我還活著 ~~ 因為當時的速度真的很快~而且後面還有很多車

I'm very glad that i still alive. because that's very fast. and many

cars came after me~~ it's very dangerous!!

所以我在這裡告訴各位有騎車的同學們~~~

so i would tell everyone who rides motorcycle

不管是什麼十萬火急的情況 千萬不要騎快車

No matter what situation or how rush it is .

Never Speeding!!

這是我要演講的短文,好像有些詞用的不太好~想講的口語一點

麻煩英文強的人幫忙校正一下 告訴我哪裡需要改正~~感謝!!!

Update:

順便問一下~~樓下兩位覺得我的程度如何= =?

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  • 1 decade ago
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    我習慣騎著機車到處跑~ 從我高中的時候就如此,這是我唯一的交通工具

    I ride motorcycle to everywhere ever since I was in high school. That is my only transportation.

    我騎了6年的機車 所以很多路面上的狀況我都很清楚

    I've been riding motorcycle for six years, so,

    I am very familiar the status on the road.

    也因為騎習慣了 我總是騎的很快 ~ 覺得時間就是金錢

    騎車在路上我很沒有耐心 尤其是當我很趕著去一個地方

    而前面又有人騎車擋我的路 我就會很生氣

    also, I am used of speeding, too. Cause time is money for me

    in the other hand; I'm very impatience~

    especially when i rush to the class or places~

    i will be very pissed off when people cut me off

    沒想到 事情發生了!!

    Until something horrible happened!!

    在去年的十月 我發生了嚴重的車禍

    October of last year, I got into a serious traffic accident.

    因為騎快車 緊急剎車滑倒

    I was speeding and i braked the motorcycle. So, i

    slipped and felt off the motorcycle!

    我就像是個棒球選手 要從一壘盜二壘一樣的撲壘

    I was like a baseball player who want to steal a base and lunged.

    我的手臂的皮膚被削掉了一大片 也因此留下了疤 !!

    My arms was scraped and left scar all over.

    我很慶幸我還活著 ~~ 因為當時的速度真的很快~而且後面還有很多車

    however, I was very glad that i was still alive, because speeds was very fast when the accident happened and there was a lot of cars followed behind me~~ yep! it's very dangerous!!

    所以我在這裡告訴各位有騎車的同學們~~~

    so now I am here to warning all the students who rides motorcycle~~~

    不管是什麼十萬火急的情況 千萬不要騎快車

    No matter how rush you are or whatever it is. Do not speed!!

    Source(s): 根據你原本的文法,修改一點
  • Anonymous
    7 years ago

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  • 1 decade ago

    真不好意思,發現第一篇有些地方改得有些詭異,別怪我別怪我><,無意間發現,

    I ride motorcycle to everywhere ever since I was in high school.

    I am very familiar the status on the road.

    2006-10-01 02:58:38 補充:

    also, I am used of speeding, too.

    I'm very impatience~

    October of last year, I got into a serious traffic accident.

    I was speeding and i(可省略)

    2006-10-01 02:58:47 補充:

    braked the motorcycle.

    I was like a baseball player who want to steal the base and lunged.

    however, I was very glad that i was still alive, because 缺冠詞the speeds(複數?第三人稱?) was very fast when the accident

    唸應外的嫩嫩學生補充

    2006-10-01 03:00:27 補充:

    阿...本來有把奇怪的地方用紅色框出來...忘記這裡不會顯示顏色,大大就從這些句子裡挑一下吧,辛苦了,找不到再問我,即時通也行

  • 1 decade ago

    我習慣騎著機車到處跑~ 從我高中的時候就如此,這是我唯一的交通工具

    Since I was a senior high school student, I ride my motorcycle to everywhere.

    It is my only conveyance.

    我騎了6年的機車 所以很多路面上的狀況我都很清楚

    I've been riding motorcycle for six years, and therefore I can handhold most of the situation when ridding.

    也因為騎習慣了 我總是騎的很快 ~ 覺得時間就是金錢

    speeding 有超速行駛的意味,而且會缺少動詞"舉例: You are speeding你超速了"~所以改成at speed.

    騎車在路上我很沒有耐心 尤其是當我很趕著去一個地方

    而前面又有人騎車擋我的路 我就會很生氣

    And I used to ride at speed , because I thought time is money

    in the other hand , I'm very impatient.

    I would be really pissed off when someone block my way.

    Especially at the time I want to get a class or place imminently.

    沒想到 事情發生了!!

    Unexpected , things happend.

    在去年的十月 我發生了嚴重的車禍

    Last year, a serious traffic accident happend.

    因為騎快車 緊急剎車滑倒(So 跟Because不能用在同個句子^^)

    i slipped and fell becasue I'was speeding and i braked my motorcycle emergently.

    我就像是個棒球選手 要從一壘盜二壘一樣的撲壘

    I just like a baseball player who want to steal a base and lunged,

    我的手臂的皮膚被削掉了一大片 也因此留下了疤 !!

    My skin of arms was scraped. The injury scarred my arms heavily.

    我很慶幸我還活著 ~~ 因為當時的速度真的很快~而且後面還有很多車

    It is very dangerous , at that time I ride very fast. And there were a lot of

    cars came after me~~

    I'm very glad that I still alive.

    所以我在這裡告訴各位有騎車的同學們~~~

    so i want to urge again and again to everyone who rides motorcycle

    不管是什麼十萬火急的情況 千萬不要騎快車

    No matter what situation even in emergency...

    Never Speeding!!

    2006-09-26 00:18:53 補充:

    不好意思,如果要用上面大姐的^^~記得~familiar要+with唷^^

    2006-09-27 02:05:48 補充:

    算不錯了,小細節要稍微注意,但是有發現有些過於相信翻譯書或軟體,往往會失去英文原有的用法:p~

    大致上算不錯嚕^^~加油嚕^^

    2006-10-11 03:27:27 補充:

    噗~你是選錯了嗎qq

    錯誤比較少的是不是選錯人了呀~

    暈倒~真想哭><

    Source(s): 我男朋友XD
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