拉奇 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請英文高手,請幫我修改英文自傳(20點)~~

這是我參考許多人的自傳和書籍,所寫的英文自傳,

想請各位英文高手幫我看看整體性

dear sir

my name is xxx, and my English name is xxx, After you read my resume, I hope that you will consider me.

I graduated from the xx University of business Administration major. As I am very interested in managing and I had good performance while I was an undergraduate, I decided to go further study, I was study for the master degree of business Administration in xx University.

I have been elected as the committee leaders of class functions. Such experiences enabled me to enhance the leadership and management ability.

In my time out of class, I also do some part-time jobs, joining the Accounting Assistant and Administrative Assistant, the experience of working makes me able to get to know the society early and learn a lot from the experiences of getting along with people, these will be very helpful to my future career.

I am optimist and active person, even under heavy stress, I would do something to release the stress and keep myself moving on.

As I have acquired learning abilities and skills throughout my college training, I will be able to learn further from my work, and willing to confront with any challenges.

麻煩大家了~~謝謝

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Dear Sir / Madam,

    My name is xxx, and I can also be called XXX as my English name.

    I graduated from the xx University majoring in Business Administrations. As I am always very interested in Management, and I had good performances while I was an undergraduate, I decided to go on further to pursue my Master's Degree in Business Administrations at xxx University.

    During my college years, I was elected as the committee leaders of class functions. Such experiences enabled me to enhance the leadership and management abilities.

    During the time of my studying, I had done part-time jobs and joined the Accounting Assistant and Administrative Assistant. The experiences of working enabled me to get to know the society early and learned a lot from the experiences of getting along with other people. These are helpful for my career objectives.

    I am optimist and and active person. Even under heavy pressure, I would do something to release the stress and keep myself moving on.

    As I have acquired learning abilities and skills throughout my college years, I am willing to learn and challenge with the new tasks that will be given in my future career.

    P.S. 你本身寫的不錯, 只幫你修改了一些, 希望照你自己原來的意思。。還有有些單字要加復數的。 加油!

    Source(s): 留美20多年的我
  • 1 decade ago

    Dear Sir/Maddam,My name is xxx and my English name is xxx, I hope that after you have read my resume, that you will consider me for possible an employment (or enrollment).I graduated from the xx University, majoring in Business Administration. I am very interested in managing and I had good performance while I was an undergraduate student. I decided to go further for study, I was studying for the Master degree of Business Administration in xx University.I have been elected as the committee leaders of class functions, such experiences enabled me to enhance the leadership and management ability.In my time out of class, I also do some part-time jobs as the Accounting Assistant and Administrative Assistant, the experience of working makes me able to get to know about the society early and learn a lot from the experiences of getting how to get along with people, these will be very helpful to my future career.I am optimist and active person, even when under heavy stress, I would do something to release the stress and keep myself moving on.As I have acquired learning abilities and skills throughout my college training, I will be able to learn further from my work, and willing to confront with any challenges.

    Source(s): ~Self; An interview instructor~
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