Verdi asked in Society & CultureLanguages · 1 decade ago

Which one fits better in this context .....?

The more stable political climate

OR

Political climate which has become more stable

Context:

But, THE MORE STABLE POLITICAL CLIMATE has again encouraged investment in exploration activities and efforts to increase production. So that it is expected that in the next few years Indonesia will see an increase again in oil production. It is hoped that several new conducive policies such as the provision of exploration incentives for the difficult oil fields and state-of-the-art technology application will contribute significantly to the production increase.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Political climate which has become more stable

    and I would word it this way...

    The political climate of Indonesia has become more stable and has again encouraged investment in exploration activities and efforts to increase production. So much that it is expected that in the next few years Indonesia will see an increase again in oil production. It is hoped that several new conducive policies such as the provision of exploration incentives for the difficult oil fields and state-of-the-art technology application will contribute significantly to the production increase...

    Source(s): and there is nothing wrong with "again"
  • 1 decade ago

    The more stable political climate.

    It's far more concise and increases the readability of the paragraph. Just make sure it is not your first reference the political situation in Indonesia.

    If you did (and don't) use the second - it should appear as:

    The political climate, which has become more stable, has encouraged ...

    note - "has again" ... get rid of the 'again'

    Good luck !!!

  • 1 decade ago

    "The more stable political climate" is better word usage; it's more concise.

    "Political climate, which has become more stable," (and, yes, it does need those commas to offset it) is wordy, which is almost never good in an essay, report, etc.

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