20點!關於健康的英文問答文法修正!

Health: Q1.What is the most serious health problem in your country?I read health magazine reports that cancer is one of the main health problems in Taiwan. The report to point out caused cancer from active or passive smoking. So, I think that cancer is definitely the main health problem in Taiwan.Q2.Do you think... show more Health: Q1.What is the most serious health problem in your country?I read health magazine reports that cancer is one of the main health problems in Taiwan. The report to point out caused cancer from active or passive smoking. So, I think that cancer is definitely the main health problem in Taiwan.Q2.Do you think that obesity is an important health issue in you country?In resent years, obesity has become a main health problem in Taiwan. More and more parents are worried that their children are over weight. Therefore, many parents prohibit kids from eating junk food. It is not only for children but also adults; the majority of adult’s people are going diet and working out everyday to keep fit.It is not good for health to be fat. Q3.How are you usually keep health in daily time?I always get up and go to bed early. I seldom eat  the fried food mostly take light food as the core. I will go to the park to jog every night. I believe that sweating will make me healthier. Now, the good health is belong to me.Q4.What is the advantages and disadvantages of health care system in your country?When I was feel sick, I went to the hospital to see the doctor. It is the cost inexpensive. And every Taiwanese who is under the public health insurance system can have medical examination once a year for free. On the other hand, because of the inexpensive cost of health care system, people are overusing the medical resource. It causes financial deficits in the health care budget in Taiwan.
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