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瑄a asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

有米自標號幫忙找錯誤(英文10題)

Dear 如花 ,

*1.How are you do? (沒)My name is Tim. *2. I 16 year old.

*3.I from Tainan.

*4.Where do you from ? (沒)I want to know more about you.

*5.Do you busy on this weekend? *6.Are you like movies?

*7.I see movies lot of .

*8.I also enjoy watch the TV at home.

*9.It\'s interested. (沒)I feel great . (沒)How about you ?

p.s*10.Please give to me your phone number.

Your friend,Leo

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    *1.How "are" you "do"?

    一句中不可以有兩個述語動詞

    改:How do you do? 或 How are you doing? (前者比較口語,寫信用後者比較恰當)

    *2. I <???> 16 year old.

    缺乏主要動詞,用 BE 動詞改正;年齡的 year 大於 1皆用複數(或著,省略數字後面的東西,因為數字本身可以表示你的年齡)

    改:I am 16 years old. 或 I'm 16 years old. 或 I'm 16.

    *3.I <???> from Tainan.

    缺乏主要動詞,用 BE 動詞改正

    改:I am from Taiwan. 或 I'm from Taiwan.

    *4.Where "do" you from?

    缺乏主要動詞,do這裡變成助動詞,改成 BE 動詞

    改:Where are you from?

    *5."Do" you busy "on" this weekend?

    缺乏主要動詞,do這裡變成助動詞,改成 BE 動詞,且因為 busy 為形容詞,故前面須加一 BE 動詞;on 指名特定星期(例:on Friday),而後面指名是 "this" 這個週末,加任何介係詞口語上都會顯的很累贅,故去掉 on

    改:Are you busy this weekend?

    *6."Are" you "like" movies?

    一句中不可以有兩個述語動詞,簡單現在式不使用 BE 動詞

    改:Do you like movies? (口語/簡訊式的說法:You like movies?)

    *7.I "see" movies "lot of".

    用詞不洽,用 watch 比較貫通;形容詞或形容詞片語要擺名詞前面;lot這裡是單數,要加不定冠詞 a 並去掉 of (沒有意義,因為後面沒接其他詞句)

    改:I watch movies a lot.

    *8.I also enjoy "watch" "the" TV "at home".

    一句中不可以有兩個述語動詞,動詞後面要加受詞名詞,故將 watch 改成 V-ing 動名詞 watching;改動名詞後TV非專有名詞(你可以看任何一個TV,而不會指名一個特定的TV),去掉冠詞 the;加 at home 比較累贅,不需要(watching TV 是興趣)

    改:I also enjoy watching TV at home.

    *9."It's" "interested".

    指名TV裡的什麼東西有興趣,因為不是TV這個東西使你有興趣;It 指名前句的興趣 watching TV,是主動使他人覺得有趣,自己不會被動性的有趣 (例:[I am/You are/He is] interested in watching TV. It's interesting.)

    改:(Some programs/shows on TV) are interesting.

    *10.Please "give to" me your phone number.

    Give 這裡是及物動詞,後面不加介係詞 (to)

    改:Please give me your phone number.

    個人建議另一寫信風格:

    Dear 如花 ,

    How are you doing? My name is Tim. I am 16 year old, and I am from Tainan. Where are you from? I would like* to know more about you.

    Are you busy this weekend?**

    Do you like movies? I watch movies a lot. I also enjoy watching TV. It's interesting, and I like it a lot.*** How about you?

    Your friend,

    Leo

    p.s. Could you please tell me your phone number?****

    *用 want 比較有要求性,不太禮貌,建議用比較謙虛的詞如 would like to

    **這問句缺乏動機,可能會讓讀者對於沒來由的問題感到奇怪。後面可以加一小段話補明你問此問題的原因,如 "If not, would you like to meet me somewhere? Maybe we can plan to do something in this coming weekend."

    *** 過度分段的句子,儘管他們文法上沒有錯,也會讓讀者讀得不舒服,所以使用一些介係詞適當的將其中一些過短的句子接起來

    ****同樣問題,原句有點強迫性,善用禮貌的助動詞如 could, would, should, might (原形為 may,同樣也有謙虛的語氣)以及其他的詞如 please

    Source(s): 4年美國留學經驗
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  • 1 decade ago

    嗯嗯 謝謝尼

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    1) How are you? 或者說 How are you doing?

    2) I am 16 years old.

    3) I am from Tainan.

    4) Where are you from? 或者說 Where do you come from?

    5) Are you busy this weekend?

    6) Do you like movies?

    7) I watch a lot of movies.

    8) I also enjoy watching TV at home. (不必說 "at home",因為看電視是興趣,跟在哪裡看沒有關係)

    9) Some shows on TV are interesting. (用 "It" 的指稱不清楚,因為你的意思是電視節目有趣,而不是 "TV" (電視機) 有趣)

    10) Please give me your phone number. (但是美國人不會這麼說。最合適的說法: May I have your phone number? 或者是 Could you give me your phone number?)

    2006-08-12 10:33:29 補充:

    我看了樓上 Anti-God 的回答,文法解釋得很詳細呢。但是第5句關於 weekend 的介詞,是不能用 in 的。"這個週末" 基本上只能說 "this weekend" ,不然就必須說 "on the weekend",不說 "on this weekend",也不用 "in the weekend"

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  • 1 decade ago

    *1.How are you do? (應該是How do you do?或How are you?)

    *2. I 16 year old.(應該是I'm 16 years old.或I'm 16.)

    *3.I from Tainan.(應該是I come from Tainan.或I live in Tainan.)

    *4.Where do you from ? (應該是Where are you from?或Where do you come from?)

    I want to know more about you.(盡量不要用want,這個字有種強迫要求語氣,用I would like to know more about you.比較好)

    *5.Do you busy on this weekend?(busy是Adj.、on是用於特定日期,因此整句需改成Are you busy in this weekend?)

    *6.Are you like movies?(應該是Do you like movies?)

    *7.I see movies lot of .(應該是I see a lot of movies.或I see lots of movies.)

    *8.I also enjoy watch the TV at home.(enjoy後面要加V-ing,TV前面在此不用加定冠詞the,因此需改成I also enjoy watcing TV at home.)

    *9.It's interested. (若您要用interested的話,需改成I'm interested in this.、若您堅持要用虛主詞It的話,則需改成It's interesting.)

    p.s*10.Please give to me your phone number(這句也有種強迫別人的感覺,我認為應該改成Would you please give me your phone number?或Do I have pleasure to have your phone number?這樣比較好唷)

    其他沒提到的基本上都是對的唷~~

    有不懂的隨時可以mail問我喔!

    Source(s): 大腦
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  • 1 decade ago

    *1.How do you do? My name is Tim. *2. I am 16 years old.

    *3.I come from Tainan.

    *4.Where do you come from ? I want to know more about you.

    *5.Are you busy this weekend? *6.Do you like movies?

    *7.I see a lots of movies.

    *8.I also enjoy watching TV at home.

    *9.It's interesting. I feel great . How about you ?

    p.s*10.Please give me your phone number.

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