Do you like my poem???

My Big Brother

The one guy

who always makes me smile

who loves to make jokes

and laughs all the while

He gave me my own name

and sang to me when I was young

My big brother he's always been

and wouldn't hesitate to donate a lung

He loves to play football

and watch sports on T.V.

but the one thing he does best

is be a good brother to me

Even though he is my big brother

I still consider him a friend

and I know he will be there for me

until the very end!!

Created by Aubrie Gribble

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  • 1 decade ago
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    That is the most touching and beautiful thing I ever read and I still can't stop cryin. Its just beautiful and you really love your brother I wish I have a big brother too.Kepp it up next you know you will be a famous poem writer I still can't stop cryin uts so emotional, beautiful, Touching, pasionate and lovely. More betiful than any poem I ever read I bet he will love it

  • 1 decade ago

    Beautiful

  • 1 decade ago

    OMG that is sooo touching and good! i'm going to save it to my documents hang on...okay, im done! its so touching because i have a mean older brother and i hate him but once i wrote this story about the good parts of him and that poem reminds me of how brothers can be good people! i love that poem! now im just so relaxed and happy! it's so good! really! i mean it! and now i have to go think about my brother...

  • 1 decade ago

    Very Very Nice

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Yes, it's great. You must be close with your brother, my brother is a jerk. Keep it up.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Its good ^^ You should try using metaphores and similies in it. They help poems alot ^^.

  • 1 decade ago

    Sure if that's the kind of poety your into!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I like your poem

  • 1 decade ago

    its really nice..yer obviously really close wit yer bro

  • 1 decade ago

    cute i take it u& ur bro are close

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