Please rate my resume 1-10 and changes if needed?

Can you rate my resume 1-10 and give input on any Changes I need to make. I have been searching for another job for the past 4 months and I think something in my resume may be turning away potiential employers. Just need some help, Thanks! PROFILE Work history in Office Support for over 10 years and Human... show more Can you rate my resume 1-10 and give input on any
Changes I need to make. I have been searching for
another job for the past 4 months and I think
something in my resume may be turning away
potiential employers. Just need some help, Thanks!

PROFILE
Work history in Office Support for over 10 years and Human Resources Assistance
Strong Customer Service personality
Computer Systems: Windows 95/97/ME, Macintosh
Proficient in: Excel, Access, Outlook, PowerPoint, and People Soft, STS

EDUCATION
2002-Cambridge College, Cambridge MA
B.A. Psychology/Juvenile Justice
1997-2000 Roxbury Community College
A.S. Early Childhood Education

EMPLOYMENT

4/02-12/03
HQ Global Workplaces, Boston MA
Receptionist
Designed a client reference guide to aide the telecommunications specialists.
Greet & assist clients in any capacity needed.
Process company & client invoices & checks.
Set up and breakdown of video conferences.
Conducted LCD presentations & T1 set up.
Answered Multi lined system for company.
Enter billing in to People Soft system.
Typed documents for company and clients.

Telecommunications Specialist
Sort incoming and outgoing company and client mailings.
Answer multi lined system for company and clients.
Assist in phone line connections.
Faxing & photocopying.

12/00-1/02
Boston Financial Data Services, Boston MA
Account Specialist
Answer client inquires on personal mutual fund accounts.
Maintain accounts with changes and redemptions daily.
Extensive knowledge of funds and prospectus.
Answer multi-line system.

3/00-12/00
CASCAP, Inc, Cambridge MA
Human Resources Assistant
Co-designed and maintained resume data base, which kept an accurate account of all incoming resume and new hirer files.
Processed and filed hard copy documents for new hires & health insurance.
Distribute incoming resumes & candidate correspondence.
Conducted reference verification call outs.
Process CORI & ESS back ground checks.

9/99-3/00
The Boston Globe/Sunday Department, Boston
Office Assistant MA (Internship)
Enter prospective articles in intranet system for editors approval.
Interview informants for article information.
Answer multi line system.
Maintained previous article logs.
Filing & Faxing.
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