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Finally My life once took a turn for the worst, Everything was going bad, I felt there was no piont in living, I was far too sad... Now theres this little thing, And happy i can be, Just a memory, a fling, To finally set me free... Free like a bird in the summertime, Flying high above the... show more Finally

My life once took a turn for the worst,
Everything was going bad,
I felt there was no piont in living,
I was far too sad...

Now theres this little thing,
And happy i can be,
Just a memory, a fling,
To finally set me free...

Free like a bird in the summertime,
Flying high above the trees,
Feeling the wonderful air up there,
The rush of refreshing breeze...

I can feel the heat,
Puonding in my heart,
Sometimes i feel like i have to fleet,
I guess the curves are just too sharp...

But I always find my way,
Through a smile, shed a tear,
My hope takes me through everyday,
To chase away my fears...

And finally, just finally,
I found what I was searching for,
And finally, just finally,
Theres one more open door...
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