Anonymous
Anonymous asked in Beauty & StyleOther - Beauty & Style · 1 decade ago

Ladies, could you please read this?

I would like to talk with any girl my age (16) who likes my poem

You are my Dream

You capture my heart

When I just hear you laugh

And though we are young

You're my missing half

When you're playing with children

And showing them love

You make my heart beat

Like your sent from above

You capture my heart

With your captivating beauty

And inspire me to make

Caring for you my duty

When you're walking, you move

With such style and grace

And I could study all day

Every line of your face

I'll search high and low

Until each other we find

But now for today

You exist in my mind

When we are apart

It's you I will miss

And long once again

To taste your sweet kiss

I'll embrace you so close

Each night and each day

But for now I will search

Till I find you .................Someday

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  • Ya-sai
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Sorry, too long

  • 1 decade ago

    beautiful poem. I'm not your age, but I'd encourage you to not stress out so much about finding a girl. I've learned the hard way that highschool is way more fun if you simply let go of trying to get a girlfriend/boyfriend and have a blast hanging out with your friends instead. Trust me :)

  • 1 decade ago

    I'm 10 yrs older than u. Sorry

  • .
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    Awwww....thats a great poem!! But Im 21.

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  • jody n
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago

    sorry to young

  • Rim
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    your creativity at this stage is wondering

  • 1 decade ago

    awwwwwww how cute! too young...

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I'm not 16, but i think I'm in luv....................(14) just in case u change your mind..............

  • 1 decade ago

    too old

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    IM READY.........................!!!!!!!!!!

    contact: india_kakinada@yahoo.com

    bye

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