LIKE my POEM?

YOU LOVE

YOU CRY

YOU DREAM

YOU HIDE

YOU WANT EVERYTHING IN UR LIFE

TIME GOES BY AND U CANT HIDE

THE TEARS THAT YOU CRIED

THE LOVE THAT DID BETRAYED YOU

AND DIDNT LET YOUR DREAMS

BECOME A PARADISE

LMAO I AM ONLY 15 AND I AM ESL SO NO COMMENTS IF ITS STUPID

Update:

I LIVE IN CANADA TORONTO, AND I AM FROM AZERBAIJAN(NO ONE KNOWS THAT COUNTRY) LMAO

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    i love it .. listin im 15 too if u wanna talk sometimes just email me good.looking00@yahoo.com

  • 1 decade ago

    Woah them last 3 lines is powerful, shows ppl that life is 2 short to dwell on drama, nice job

  • 1 decade ago

    I do not know what LMAO and ESL are but I did like your poem. Great Job!

  • 1 decade ago

    It is pretty good----follow your dreams--and you'll get better, and never listen to critism, like that girl that said my dog can write better than that---do you think her dog really can?? And anyway, words won't hurt you--what she says will only make you stronger---PERSUE YOUR DREAMS!! You regret doing something bad, but what you don't do, you'll regret more. Good Luck!

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    I LOVE IT. ur an original its awesome. i love how u get so powerful and realistic b/cuz it shows so much reality!!! keep on writing poetry!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    that was fantastic! it was powerful and very meaningful! it gave me strenghth and will! you should write poems like this one more often! you have a whole lot of talent! keep it up!

  • 1 decade ago

    that's a good poem if your not in a poetry class get in one so you can became better

  • 1 decade ago

    My dog wrote a better poem than that....sorry!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    its ok. kinda short but the message is good. whats ur first language?

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    i love it its so good btw im 15 too

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