低逃嫻 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

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1.中翻英:

在台灣開車很危險。車輛總是很多,也常看到車子在蛇行。車禍一直都在發生。每一年都有好幾千人因為酒醉駕駛而喪命。解決惡劣駕駛人這個問題一個方法就是對他們施以更重的罰金或懲處。如果繼續違反交通規則的話,他們的駕照就應永遠吊銷。我知道這聽起來挺嚴峻的,但我相信唯有這樣做,我們才能改善台灣的交通。

我的答案:

It is very dangerous to drive in Taiwan. There are always a lot of cars, and we often see the cars drive in a zigzag manner. The car accidents are happening all the time. And thousands of people died because drunk driving every year. The only way to solve the problem of bad drivers is to give them tougher fine or punishment. If they continue to break the traffic rules, their driving lisence should be canceled forever. I know it sounds pretty cruel, but i believe it is the only way to improve the traffic in Taiwan.

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  • Danny
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
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    在台灣開車很危險。車輛總是很多,也常看到車子在蛇行。車禍一直都在發生。每一年都有好幾千人因為酒醉駕駛而喪命。解決惡劣駕駛人這個問題一個方法就是對他們施以更重的罰金或懲處。如果繼續違反交通規則的話,他們的駕照就應永遠吊銷。我知道這聽起來挺嚴峻的,但我相信唯有這樣做,我們才能改善台灣的交通。

    It is very dangerous to drive in Taiwan. The traffic is always heavy and we can often see some drivers drive zigzag on the roads. The car accidents happen frequently. And thousands of people died of drunk driving every year.

    The only way to solve this problem is to fine and punish these lousy drivers more severely . If they continue breaking the traffic rules, their drivers' licenses sould be provoked forever.

    I know it sounds pretty cruel, but I strongly believe this is the only way to improve the traffic condition in Taiwan.

    附註:

    1. in a zigzag manner 沒見過這種用法;且zigzag通常做副詞用~

    2.died because drunk driving ?

    >because 後面接完整的子句

    >because of + Ving or N

    3.continue+Ving

    FYI~ 高手不敢當~

  • 1 decade ago

    It is very dangerous to drive in Taiwan. The traffic is always heavy and zigzag driving are seen often. Car accidents happen frequently. Thousands of people died of drunk driving every year. The solution to lousy drivers is to punish them with more severe consequences. If they continue breaking traffic laws, their licenses should to provoked forever. I know this sounds somewhat ruthless, but I believe it is the only solution to Taiwan's traffic problems.

    Source(s): 美國高中生
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