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以下是我以交通為題所寫的自問自答,請幫我看一下文法有沒有問題(包含問題句)謝謝了!

1.There are an excessive number of cars on our roads today and this leads to many problems, could you say something what problems you reckon?

In my view, there are too many cars on our roads, and it has led to some problems such as, congestion, air pollution…and so on.

First of all, People drive car on the road that will emit toxic material into the air to harm our human health.

Moreover, too many cars it will leads to congestion. If we always live in a congestion life everyday. We will waste much time waiting for the traffic jam; Furthermore, it may cause many traffic accident too. Besides, too many cars will make people demand more and more natural resources such as petrol. But that only leads to more air pollution, which will results in greenhouse effects, harm our earth.

2.How do you think to deal with traffic problem?

I think that if we could use public transportation as much as possible. We could release some of those problems. It is possible to use bicycle and walk to the destination where you want to go.

And there are some advantages for us. One is helpful your body another we can save more money on the cost of transport. Moreover, the government needs to build more routes for the people’s need, and increase car taxes to reduce the number of car on the road.

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  • 威廉
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
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    1.There are an excessive number of cars on our roads today and it leads to many problems, can you guess what problems may happen?

    為了時態一致,could 我用can

    我們不說say something ,say 要改成tell

    reckon有認為、估計、猜想的意思,因此我把動詞tell又改成guess了,「你能猜到有什麼問題可能會發生嗎」,不知道是否偏離您的意思

    2. In my view, there are too many cars on our roads, and it has led to some problems such as congestion, air pollution and so on.

    such as後面直接加congestion,後面在加逗點,後面也不用…直接寫and so on

    3. First of all, People drive car on the road that will emit toxic material into the air to harm our human health.

    這句ok

    4. Moreover, too many cars will lead to congestion. If we live in a jammed life, we might waste much time waiting for the traffic jam; Furthermore, it may cause many traffic accidents too. Besides, too many cars will make people demand more and more natural resources such as petroleum. But it only leads to more air pollution, which will result in greenhouse effects, harm our earth.

    你在助動詞will後面容易加變化動詞,要記得助動詞後的動詞是原形喔! 還有其他一些文法問題我也幫您改過了,如果您想知道錯在哪裡,把原稿留著,寄給我,我在幫您解答

    5. How do you think to deal with traffic problem?

    I think that if we could use public transportation as much as possible, we could release some of those problems. It is possible to ride bicycle and walk to the destination where you want to go to.

    假設句要有一句副詞子句跟主要子句,之間以逗點隔開

    6. And there are some advantages to us. One is that it is helpful for your body, another is that we can save more money on the cost of transportation. Moreover, the government should build more routes for the people’s need, and increase car taxes to reduce the number of cars on roads.

    如果有其他問題,我的信箱ed90080@yahoo.com.tw

    希望有幫上您的忙!

    2006-06-06 09:46:49 補充:

    3. First of all, People drive cars on roads that will emit toxic material into the air to harm our human health.6.One is that it is helpful for our body,~~~

    2006-06-07 15:42:18 補充:

    不客氣

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    5 years ago

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