fafa asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

有人可以幫我把這遍英文用同意思不同句子改一下,20點

Ethical problem can be easily defended as two categories: external and internal. The majority of ethic programs focus on preventing external problem, because it brings negative effect to the organization, which make publics focus on the organization’s failure.

On the other hand, to sensitize employees to ethical issues must decrease internal ethical problem at the same time. Internal problems often seem minor compared to externals, and invisible and normally do not result in external failure costs. There is a list of employee’s behavior that might be cause internal ethical problem include attendance, teamwork, appearance, attitude, productivity, communication, cooperation, and respect. If there is some harmful behaviors happened in daily operation that result in an unseen burden on operating performance so reducing internal ethical problem should be concerned by organization as well.

There is a direct interaction between an ethical working environment and employee loyalty. In order to catch employee’s attention about ethical issues, HCA itself should provide an ethical company culture for employees, and fostering employee loyalty should be a priority for the organization. Then, employees believe the organization is ethical, they more likely to be loyal. As long as employee loyalty increased, they will happy to work for company, and put more effort into the work.

Apparently, the provided suggestions and recommendations may not constructive enough to supplement their current ethical program, but there still are various ways to improve the program. HCA’s new leaders will seek more efficient methods to solve such a serious problem. Last but not least, the ethical and moral topic throughout the business or leadership scope will never stop discussion and it will ever affects any businesses’ development and operation in which positive or negative directions.

有人可以幫幫我嗎,英文太爛,要把上面那幾段英文改成一遍相同意思但不一樣的句子重寫出來的英文,自己沒法改但急著要用,麻煩英文好的人幫忙一下,謝謝,不是翻成中文哦

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有人可以幫忙稍微改一下,感覺不太一樣就可以,不用每一句都要改,拜託啦,我真的不會改,感謝你們幫忙。

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    Ethical problem can be defended as two categories, namely, external and internal. the majority of ethic programs focus on avoiding external problem, because it brings negative effect to the organizations, and publics put their attentions on the organization's failure.

    meanwhile, to sensitize employees to ethical issues must decrease internal ethical problem at the same time. Internal problems often seem minor compared to externals, and normally do not result in external failure costs and is invisible. to cause internal ethical problem by employee's behavior, there is a list about it, which include attendance, teamwork, appearance, attitude, productibity, communication, cooperation, and respect. in daily operation, if there is some harmful behaviours happrned, that result in an unseen burden on operating performance so reducing internal ethical problem should be concerned by organization as well.

    between an ethical working environment and employee loyalty, there is a direct interaction. in order to catch employee's attention about ethical issues, HCA itself should provide an ethical company culture for employees, and fostering employee loyalty should be a priority for the organization. then, the organization is ethical is belived by the employees, they more likely to be loyal. as long as employee loyalty increased, they will put more effort into the work and happy to work for the company.

    apparently, the provided suggestions and recommendations may not constructive enough to supplement their current ethical program, but there are still other ways to improve it. To solve such a serious problem, HCA's new leaders will have to seek more efficient methods.

    Last but not least, the ethical and moral topic throughout the business or leadership scope will not stop discusion and it will carrys on effect any businesses' development and operation in either positive or negative ways.

    2006-06-07 19:58:00 補充:

    it's really long ne..

    i changed a bit, hope this helps..

    this is for ur assignment right?

    next time u can just have a dictionary with you, and look up in the dictionary for similar words, and then just replace it!

    it's easy!

    Source(s): myself~ i live overseas..
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