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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

急啊~~~可請大大幫忙改作文~~我的作文題目是”你對最低工資

Each country sets its own minimum wage policy and regulation, as Government has regulations minimum wage at least amount of money an employer can pay its employer but it cannot be lower what government to sets minimum wage standard level. This is help who receive lower minimum wage person and they need have basically ability to support their family that’s why government to sets the policy and regulation.

The minimum wage standard level has constantly competition advantage implementation and improving to help strengthen enterprises. Therefore, if the minimum wage sets the standard level is higher than price of the market also it will effect enterprises has increase cost to hire employees and then it will not weaken the competitiveness. That guide from enterprise and individual work is signal salary, supply-demand relationship of labor market. If the labor force supply is unable to meet the demand and thus labor force participation and physical labor supply will increases also wage will increasing and stimulate. As affect remission supply and demand of contradiction. As below are my consider contention.

Update:

Pros Side:

1.Maintain an equivalent market rate among all employees.

When the community has to be out of a job, employers will to take the opportunity to reduce the staff wages or threat them. Therefore, the minimum wage can make employment to obtain which basic salary demand.

Update 2:

2.Attract more foreign investor, because have the cheap labor to hire.

3.Labor cost low result production cost low.

Update 3:

Con’s Side:

1.Can’t afford today’s living cost with is high

2.Cannot cover family expenditure. For example:

3.Money roll into market would be less, because people just get little income

Update 4:

4.Inflation would happen because goods more than demand( people spending lower less)

5.Citizen would migrate to other country to find high wage jobs

6.Less specialty and professional people, because they will to stay oversea to get a high wage jobs.

Update 5:

In fact, have raised the labor productivity, then enterprise has been improved their benefit, thus will retain brain drain.

Update 6:

以上是我的作文和論點,那前面我是有敘述我想要說的最低工資的一些細節,那下面是我贊成和不贊成的論點。可請大大們幫我修改哪邊需要改進。

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  • 1 decade ago
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    [ ] = 我改過的; 我也有刪了一點.. (or 把東西倒過來) 你可以回去再比對

    Each country sets its own minimum wage policy and regulation[. The government] has regulations [on the] minimum wage an employer can pay its [employees] but it cannot be lower [than] what government to sets minimum wage standard level. This is [to] help [the people] who receive [wages] lower [than] minimum and they need [to] have [the basic] ability to support their family[. That's] why government to sets the policy and regulation.

    The minimum wage standard level has [constant] competition advantage implementation and improving to help strengthen enterprises. Therefore, if the minimum wage sets the standard level higher than [the] price of the market it will [also affect] enterprises [that] has [to] increase [the] cost to hire employees[. Then] it will not weaken the competitiveness. That guide from [the] enterprise and individual work is signal salary, supply-demand relationship of labor market. If the labor force supply is unable to meet the demand[,] labor force participation and physical labor supply will increase [and] wage will [also increase] and stimulate. As [the effect of] remission supply and demand of contradiction. [Consider my contentions below]

    論點都不錯.

    In fact, [we] have raised the labor productivity, [and] enterprise has been improved [to] their benefit.

    注意 - 不要漏掉了 "the", "to" 這種字! 很重要.. 有些句子超長的, 我幫你分成兩句了. 內容寫的很好喔..

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