小棱 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

請幫我檢查文法時態有沒有錯誤~商業信~~謝謝

這是一封商業開發信~請幫我檢查文法時態有沒有錯誤~~謝謝

Dear Sirs,

How do you do!Do you remember us? It has been quite a long time since your company made an inquiry about our product item (S. S. 304).

We did not get your further message in recent years. If you have new inquiry,do please let us know. If you have not such inquiry in hand now. PLS keep our contact details in your file. And contact us any time you like.

By the way,we have updated our website recently if you want to know more about our products,please browse our website at http://www.abc.com.tw. And hope we can have chance to cooperate with you,thanks.

Waiting for your reply.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Dear Sirs,

    How do you do!Do you remember us? It has been quite a long time since your company made an inquiry about our product item (S. S. 304).

    We haven't got your further message in recent years. If you have any new inquiries, please do let us know. If you have not such inquiries in hand now, PLS alsob keep our contact details in your file and contact us any time you like.

    By the way,we have updated our website recently. If you want to know more about our products,please browse our website at http://www.abc.com.tw. Hope we can have another chance to cooperate with you,thanks.

    Looking forward to your reply.

    Source(s): myself
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