希望 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

”business letter ” please help

題目:Write a letter to Margaret Sims confirming details of her speech next week.

Make sure to include time, place and topic. Offer ro help in any way you can.

以下是我寫的信,高手幫忙糾正一下ㄅ^^感激不盡

Dear Mr. Margaret,

I am writing to confirm details of your speech next week. It is going to be on May 26. The speech will begin at 4 o’clock in the afternoon in classroom 17 of our school. The topic is “How to become a successful business woman.” I heard that our students would like to know your experience. We would be happy to join your speech.

If I can be of more help, please feel free to contact me at 9:00 a.m. to 4:00 p.m. before this Friday.

Sincerely

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  • 娃娃
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
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    Dear Mr. Margaret,

    My name is xxx (最好先自我介紹, 先讓對方知道你是誰). I am writing to confirm the details of your speech next week, which is going to be on May 26th, 2006. The speech will begin at 4 PM in the afternoon and will be located in classroom # 17 of our school.

    My students are very excited about your visiting and the speech, which is "How to become a successful business woman". If you need more information from me, please feel free to contact me from 9:00 AM to 4:00 PM before this Friday, I will be happy to assistant you.

    Sincerely,

    你自己的名字和公司或學校的名字, 以及日期

    Source(s): ME
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