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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

急啊~~請大大幫忙改英文文章~~~謝謝

More and more people who have American dream immigrate into United States after World War II. As before the immigration policy of United States was not strict for accepting immigrants. Thus, they accepted not only lots of refugees from poor and communist countries but also professional in some specific fields. To be a country of greatly freedom and democracy was the goal of the policy. But it brought a lot of affection to original Americans and increases the economic burden of United States. However, after 911 it becomes rigorous to protect their citizens from terrorism. It still brought problems because of strict visa policy. So-called, we need to deal with immigration policy discreetly. In my opinion, I’m disagreed with non-strict immigration policy.

It is hard to get a good job for local people in their kind of difficult job market. Immigration causes rising of the population. Demand is more than supply. Rate of unemployment will increase because of insufficient source in United States. More and more problems will appear, such as increasing of criminal rate. It will lead the competitiveness of United States to go down. The economic of USA won’t be an open economic because international business reducing setting up their subsidiaries in United States. In another way, immigrants make money in USA and they wire their salary to motherland for their relatives.

Update:

We don’t know that a money remittance is taxed or not.

We know the parade of immigration for the right of illegal immigrant on May 1st, 2006.

Update 2:

“The squeaky wheel gets the grease?” The illegal immigrants should deport. The government should make a strict law to rule of immigration policy.

Update 3:

Or there will be more and more illegal immigrants. The immigration policy should become an optional immigration policy. Accepting the immigrants who have specific skill ability and protecting the job opportunity of original citizens should be done at the same time.

Update 4:

In conclusion, protecting our citizens rigorously will help our economic growth and improvement. Thus, we need to find the best way to solve immigrant’s problem. When government changes the policy, they need to option which policy can be acceptable by citizens.

Update 5:

我補充部分是我的文章部份,因為我加不上去。所以真不好意思。希望你們看的懂我的文章

Update 6:

哇你好厲害喔!!可以敎敎我英文嘛

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    More and more people dreamed about immigrating to the United States after World War II. Previously the immigration policy of the United States did not have many restrictions for immigrants. Thus, they did not only accept lots of refugees from poor and communist countries, but also professional in some specific fields. To be a country with great freedom and democracy was the goal of the policy. However it has brought a lot of affections to the original Americans and the rise of economic burdens for the country. However, after 911 it became rigorous to protect their citizens from terrorism. Problems still occure due to the visa policy. With that said, we need to deal with immigration policy discreetly. In my opinion, I disagree with non-strict immigration policy. It is hard to get a good job for local people in their kind of difficult job market. Immigration causes rising of the population. Demand is higher than supply. Unemployment rate increased because of insufficient source in United States. More and more problems will occur, such as increase of criminal rate. It will lead to the competitiveness of United States drops. The economic of USA won’t remain as open economy because international business will reduce the numbers of setting up their subsidiaries in the States. In addition, immigrants make money in USA and they wire their salaries to their home countries for their relatives.We don’t know that whether money remittance will be taxed. We know that the parade of immigration for the right of illegal immigrant on May 1st, 2006. “The squeaky wheel gets the grease?” The illegal immigrants should be deported. The government should force the law to alter the immigration policy.

    2006-05-25 10:53:17 補充:

    Otherwise there will be more and more illegal immigrants. The immigration policy should become an optional immigration policy. Accepting the immigrants who have specific skill ability and protecting the job opportunity of original citizens should be done at the same time.

    2006-05-25 10:53:31 補充:

    In conclusion, protecting our citizens rigorously will help our economic growth and improvement. Thus, we need to find the best way to solve immigrants' problem. When government changes the policy, they should have the right to vote for accetance as a citizen.

    2006-05-25 10:53:43 補充:

    P.S. sorry i got confuse over some sentences so that i didn't make any changes

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