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More and more people who have American dream immigrate into United States after World War II. As before the immigration policy of United States was not strict for accepting immigrants. Thus, they accepted not only lots of refugees from poor and communist countries but also professional in some specific fields. To... show more More and more people who have American dream immigrate into United States after World War II. As before the immigration policy of United States was not strict for accepting immigrants. Thus, they accepted not only lots of refugees from poor and communist countries but also professional in some specific fields. To be a country of greatly freedom and democracy was the goal of the policy. But it brought a lot of affection to original Americans and increases the economic burden of United States. However, after 911 it becomes rigorous to protect their citizens from terrorism. It still brought problems because of strict visa policy. So-called, we need to deal with immigration policy discreetly. In my opinion, I’m disagreed with non-strict immigration policy.
It is hard to get a good job for local people in their kind of difficult job market. Immigration causes rising of the population. Demand is more than supply. Rate of unemployment will increase because of insufficient source in United States. More and more problems will appear, such as increasing of criminal rate. It will lead the competitiveness of United States to go down. The economic of USA won’t be an open economic because international business reducing setting up their subsidiaries in United States. In another way, immigrants make money in USA and they wire their salary to motherland for their relatives.
Update: We don’t know that a money remittance is taxed or not.
We know the parade of immigration for the right of illegal immigrant on May 1st, 2006.
Update 2: “The squeaky wheel gets the grease?” The illegal immigrants should deport. The government should make a strict law to rule of immigration policy.
Update 3: Or there will be more and more illegal immigrants. The immigration policy should become an optional immigration policy. Accepting the immigrants who have specific skill ability and protecting the job opportunity of original citizens should be done at the same time.
Update 4: In conclusion, protecting our citizens rigorously will help our economic growth and improvement. Thus, we need to find the best way to solve immigrant’s problem. When government changes the policy, they need to option which policy can be acceptable by citizens.
Update 5: 我補充部分是我的文章部份,因為我加不上去。所以真不好意思。希望你們看的懂我的文章
Update 6: 哇你好厲害喔!!可以敎敎我英文嘛
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