? asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

各位英文高手..可以幫我看看.文章是否有誤嗎?..謝謝..

這一篇文章由中翻英了之後.還是沒有什麼信心,可否請大大幫我檢查一下,是否有文法的錯誤吼..謝謝..

The case family chosen by this study is a pattern of Aboriginal Single Mothers’ Family. Because the researcher wants to know the whole pictures of her family life and school life, he must have a deep knowledge of the whole scenario of life. Therefore, to achieve the purpose of the study, the researcher decides to do the research by the qualitative case study which emphasizes on the whole process and enables to combine with experience .

In the process of the study, the researcher takes himself as a participant-as-observer and gets information or data by interviewing, observing, and documenting in order to collect the information of the life picture. In the research, long period of devotion, triangulation, examination, and thick description are involved to increase the exactitude of the data. And put the person in context without any preconceived ideas eventually in order to achieve the goal of constructing the whole life picture.

The results of the research are as follow: (1) The picture of her family life, including an extraordinary day, straitened family economies, autocratic way of teaching, helpless but strong, diverse roles. (2) The picture of the school life includes a special day, uncertain friendship, active behaviors, outstanding race result, and stable achievement.

Hope readers be able to construct the life picture of the aboriginal students through this research. The most important is that through the research, people from all corners of the world like you who also care about those aboriginal students can seem to see PANAY, just like me.

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若最後一段中文內容是..

希望能藉由此研究,能讓讀者在心中形塑拼繪出單親原住民學童的生活圖像。當然更希望的是,能經由這樣的研究,讓在不知名世界角落中關心著單親學童處境的你,也如同和我一樣身歷其境,並對原住民單親的學童世界有更深的一層了解。

則要如何改才好哩...謝謝...

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  • Miss H
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    1 decade ago
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    The family chosen for this case study is a good example of Aboriginal Single Mothers’ Family. The researcher must have a thorough understanding of the single mother's life in order to fully grasp her family life and school life. Therefore, to achieve the purpose of the study, the researcher decides to conduct the research by performing a qualitative case study which emphasizes on the whole process and enables the researcher to combine it with experience .

    In the process of the study, the researcher acts as a participant as well as an observer, and obtains information or data by interviewing, observing, and documenting, in order to get a clear picture of her life. In the research, long period of devotion, triangulation, examination, and detailed description are involved to increase the exactitude of the data. Also, the life of the single mother under study is put in context without any preconceived ideas, in order to eventually achieve the goal of presenting a objective and complete image of her life.

    The outcomes of the research are as follow: (1) A complete picture of her family life, including an extraordinary day, the financially-strained situation in the family, the autocratic way of teaching children, and her helpless and yet strong, diverse roles. (2) A complete picture of her school life including a special day, unstable friendships, an active attitude, outstanding results in races, and stable academic achievement.

    It is hoped that through this research, readers will be able to witness the life of the aboriginal students. The most important is that through the research, people from all corners of the world, like youself, who also care about those aboriginal students, can come to understand PANAY's life, just like I have.

    Source(s): myself
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