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Anonymous asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

更英文會話裡的錯誤,有誰可以幫我找

Elenore: Hello.

Denise: Hi,Elenore. This Denise. I did called you this morning.You wasn\'t home.

Elenore: I was at the bank. I be there for two hours this morning. The bank teller made

a mistake. Then when I showed her the mistake, she got angry. And after that

the bank\'s computer went down.

Denise: That\'s awful. What you do?

Elenore: I complained to the manager.

Denise: Will she help?

Elenore: No, she didn\'t. In fact, she did laugh and did say, \"Put your money under your

mattress!\"

Denise: Wow! What did you doing then?

Elenore: I was very angry. I took all my money out of my account.

Denise: Good for you.

Elenore: Tomorrow I wrote a letter to the bank director. And I\'m going put my money in

the bank across the street.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    我是張國志老師!老師又來啦!讓老師來幫你! 以下字有錯誤的,已經用引號("")標示出來並且改正!

    Elenore: Hello.

    Denise: Hi,Elenore. This "is"Denise. I did "call" you this morning.You wasn't home.

    Elenore: I was at the bank. I "had been" there for two hours this morning. The bank teller made a mistake. Then when I showed her the mistake, she got angry. And after that

    the bank's computer went down.

    Denise: That's awful. What "did" you do?

    Elenore: I complained to the manager.

    Denise: "Did" she help?

    Elenore: No, she didn't. In fact, she did laugh and did say, "Put your money under your

    mattress!"

    Denise: Wow! What did you "do" then?

    Elenore: I was very angry. I took all my money out of my account.

    Denise: Good for you.

    Elenore: Tomorrow I wrote a letter to the bank director. And I'm going "to" put my money in the bank across the street.

    Source(s): 英文天王張國志老師
  • 1 decade ago

    你選的標準答案中有些地方的文法還是錯的!!!!!

    You wasn't home. ---> You WEREN"T home.

    That's awful. --->That WAS awful.

    Tomorrow I wrote a letter to the bank director. ---> Tomorrow, I WILL WRITE a letter to the director of the bank, and I am going to deposit my money in the bank across the street.

  • 1 decade ago

    Elenore: Hello.

    Denise: Hi,Elenore. This (is) Denise. I called you this morning.You wasn't home.

    Elenore: I was at the bank. I (was) there for two hours this morning. The bank teller made a mistake. Then when I showed her the mistake, she got angry. And after that

    the bank's computer (shut) down.

    Denise: That's awful. What (did) you do?

    Elenore: I complained to the manager.

    Denise: (Does) she help?

    Elenore: No, she didn't. In fact, she did laugh and did say, "Put your money under your

    mattress!"

    Denise: Wow! What did you doing then?

    Elenore: I was very angry. I took all my money out of my account.

    Denise: Good (on) you.

    Elenore: Tomorrow I (will write) a letter to the bank director. And I'm going put my money in the bank across the street.

    Source(s): ~"~
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