I deeply appreciated the interviewed of your company yesterday
I deeply intersted in the position of your company
If I have the honor to become a number of your company I will
give my best assisting to your company
If you have the decsion of the interview ,please kindly let me know
Your kindly replay will be appreciated
- Anonymous1 decade agoFavorite Answer
Dear Sir, I deeply appreciated the interview I had with the corporation. I show strong interest in the position I applied for. If I have the likelihood to become a member of your company, I will have the opportunity to let the corporation become for efficient. When a decision is rendered, please kindly inform me. Your reply is greatly appreciated. Best Regards,請鉛您的大名
2006-05-13 14:49:33 補充：
不是 replay, 因為 replay= 重玩正確用法是 reply= 回覆
2006-05-13 14:49:52 補充：
不是 replay, 因為 replay= 重玩正確用法是 reply= 回覆Source(s): Me-studying at University of San Francisco
- 1 decade ago
Dear sir,(英文不用冒號, 請用逗號)
I deeply appreciated the interview(這是名詞, 不用ed) of your company yesterday.
I am intersted in the position of your company. (be insteresed in感到有興趣)
If I have the honor to become a member(成為一員, 不是number) of your company, I will give my best assist(一樣是名詞, 不用ing) to your company.
If you have any decsion of the interview, please let me know.
Your kindly replay will be appreciated (請不要用倒裝句)
最後一句這樣寫比較好I would appreciate your replay.
2006-05-14 12:00:35 補充：
咳! 是reply 回覆~ 打錯了Source(s): me.