瀞萱
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瀞萱 asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

急!急!急!-描述我的母親-幫我文法的檢查~明天就要交了!

My mother is not pretty but she really cute.She is in her fourties.She is fairly short and petite.Her hair is short and dark.She has a fair and beautiful skin.Her face shape is an oval.She has big eyes and they are very charming.She does homework in the morning,so she wake up early every day.Her main interests in life are watching TV,shopping and cooking.When I was nine years old,I operate for my eyes.My mother take care of me allnight.I never forget it.She devote ourself everything,but she never complanint.Mother I love you.Because has you,today only then has I safe smooth growth.Mother pain,the mother raises graciousness. Not easy easily expression own to mother\'s cordiality.The once a year Mother\'s Day, lets your treasure express all thanks for you.<請不要用翻譯機回答!THS.>

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  • 1 decade ago
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    My mother is not pretty but she is really cute.

    She is in her fourties.She is fairly short and petite.

    Her hair is short and dark.She has beautiful skin.

    She has an oval shape face and charming big eyes.

    She does homework in the morning, so she wakes up early every day.

    Her interests are watching TV,shopping and cooking.

    When I was nine years old,I got an eye operation. My mother

    was there to take care of me all the time. This is something that I will never forget.

    She devote herself into everything,and she never complains.

    Mother, I love you.Because of you, I grow up safely and smoothly.

    Words failed to describe my feeling, but thanks for being here with me when I needed you.

    I wish the best to you and a happy mother's day!

    I love you, mom.

    (文章大致上只有後面看不太懂 我有加幾句進去 希望意思不會差太遠)

    2006-05-10 00:44:53 補充:

    = =你媽媽是早上做功課還是做家事?是公克就"homework" 家事 就是"house chores"港沒看到 sorry

    Source(s): me~
  • 狐狸
    Lv 6
    1 decade ago

    My mother is not pretty but really cute.

    She is in her forties. She is quite short and petite.

    Her hair is short and black. She has fair and beautiful skin.

    She has an oval face and big and charming eyes.

    She does housework in the morning so she wakes up early every day.

    Her main interests in life are watching TV, shopping and cooking.

    I could remember that when I was nine years old, I had an operation on my eyes.

    My mother took care of me all night. I could never forget it.

    She devotes herself to everything for us, but she never complanined.

    I love you, Mother.

    Because of you, I could grow up safely and smoothly without any worry.

    You suffered to give birth to us; you raise us with great graciousness.

    No word could praise you for your cordiality.

    On Mother's Day, which is the precious and great,

    I have nothing but be filial to you to express all my thanks to you.

    我幫你修改了一些用字及文法的錯誤...

    後半段也改變一些內容使文意通順...

    參考看看吧^^

    F.Y.I.

    2006-05-10 00:38:06 補充:

    如果要中文我可以再翻給你

    2006-05-10 03:42:16 補充:

    She DEVOTED herself to everything for us, but she never COMPLAINED.打字錯誤

    Source(s): Myself
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