15點!幫我修改這段「未來計畫」短文好嗎?

看看有沒有文法錯誤或用詞不當的情形In order to become more experienced, I am longing to put what I\'ve learned into practice instead of sitting at home. Besides, it\'s my short-term goal to get certificates related with what I am going to do as possible as I can. Moreover, for the purpose of keeping improving myself, I need to assimilate more knowledge and absorb myself in professional skills. Because of doing so, I can make efforts and contribute to the company.

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  • 1 decade ago
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    In order to become more experienced, I am longing to put what I've learned into practice instead of sitting at home. Besides, it's my short-term goal to get certificates related with(to, be related to 是很常用的片語,因為是後位修飾,be動詞是省略的,如果要用with 的話,我覺得應該是relating with) what I am going to do as possible as I can. Moreover, for the purpose of keeping improving myself, I need to assimilate(它就有消化並吸收的意思了) more knowledge and absorb myself in(my,不這樣覺得怪怪的,應該只要用my就好了) professional skills. Because(by way只是覺得比較好,文法並沒有問題) of doing so, I can make efforts and contribute to the company.

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  • 1 decade ago

    這樣改比較順In order to be more experienced, I will put what I've learned into practice instead of sitting at home. Besides, it's my short-term goal to get certificates related with what I am going to do as possible as I can. Moreover, in order to keep improving myself, I will assimilate more knowledge and train myself familiar in professional skills. Through above,  I convinced I can make efforts and contribute to the company.我照你原本的意思修的看看有沒有差很多吧

    Source(s): 自己
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