asked in 社會與文化語言 · 1 decade ago

一些句子的中翻英,如果能有音標更好

由於上班的時候會用到,麻煩各位幫我翻譯一下

由於都是日常生活在用的句子,希望能簡單明瞭,但要有禮貌^_^

1.請問想找哪種款式?

2.我覺得這個款式蠻適合你的。

3.目前只剩下這個顏色(款式)囉!

4.戴起來會太鬆或太緊嗎?

5.請問方便付訂金嗎?

6.如果有任何問題,歡迎回來,我可以為您服務!

Update:

想請問一下第一位回答者,為何句頭都要加"asked"?

是代表何種意思或語氣呢?

Update 2:

那再請問一下,如果比較口語化的講法,跟兩位所提供的句子,有哪些地方需要稍作更動的呢?

3 Answers

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  • inch
    Lv 5
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    因為是一般的日常對話, 所以盡量力求簡潔明確, 達意最重要

    以下是比較口語也較為平常的用法

    1.請問想找哪種款式?

    #(May I help you?) Which kind of clothes are you looking for? (May I help you?)

    (碰到客人通常第一句話都會先問"May I help you?"是一個簡單又正式的開頭

    先問人家"需要幫忙嗎?" 然後再進一步問對方要找哪一種衣服)

    2.我覺得這個款式蠻適合你的。

    #It suits you very much. (It is quite suitable on you.)

    (可以省略I think之類代表"我覺得"的贅字, 聽起來比較誠懇)

    3.目前只剩下這個顏色(款式)囉!

    #I'm really sorry. We got only this color now. (There's only this color left.)

    (先表示抱歉和遺憾... "目前"用now就很合適了, 用別的片語反而顯得累贅)

    4.戴起來會太鬆或太緊嗎?

    #Is it too loose or tight?

    ("when you put it on"在這邊會顯得很多餘, 一般口語不會這樣說, 直接問Is it too loose or tight?比較明確, 如果碰到外國人, 句子盡量簡單達意最佳)

    5.請問方便付訂金嗎?

    #Excuse me, would you please pay the deposit first?

    (Excuse me就是中文的"不好意思...", 要問客人問題之前先說個Excuse me會更有禮貌喔! 尤其是要請對方付錢的時候^^)

    6.如果有任何問題,歡迎回來,我可以為您服務!

    #Welcome back if there are any problems. It's my honor to serve you anytime.

    #Welcome back if you have any problems. I would be glad to serve you again.

    (Welcom back就可以代表歡迎回來, 依照英文的文法來說, 這樣的順序會比"If you have any probomes, welcome back..."來的流暢, 對方也比較容易理解)

    至於為什麼第一位回答者的句首都會加上"Asked",

    我想應該是因為他用翻譯軟體直接整段式翻譯,

    或者是文法的概念不太好,

    所以才直接把所謂的"請問"翻譯成Asked, 但是是完全錯誤的用法

    很有禮貌的發問開頭通常會用"Would you please..." 或是 "May I..."

    第一位回答者的文法是全部錯誤的

    (很抱歉我必須直接這麼說, 但是我想發問者既然會問這些問題,

    代表他在英文上有一些不懂, 所以錯誤的回答和文法都有可能會誤導發問者)

    第二位的文法和翻譯是比較正確的,

    但是用法比較偏向Chinese English,

    一般的口語英文很少出現這樣的對話...

    Source(s): 我是part-time的外文接待
  • 1 decade ago

    以下我都加了”你”

    1.May I please ask what kind of style you are looking for?

    2.I believe this style suits you.

    3.At this time, we are only left with this color (Style)

    4.Is it too loose or tight when you are trying it on?

    5.If it’s not much of trouble, is it possible for you to pay a deposit?

    6.If you have any other question, please come back. I can assist you.

    Source(s): 偶 !
  • 王婷
    Lv 4
    1 decade ago

    1 Asked thought which kind of design looks for?

    2 I thought this design suits you.

    3 At present only is left over this color (design)!

    4 Asked wears can too loose or too is tight?

    5 Asked the convenience pays the deposit?

    6 If has any question, welcome to come back, I may at your service!

    希望用的上 ^^

    Source(s): 自己專供英文
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